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Izaan Raza
Member since February 28, 2023
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A Message From Future
By Izaan Raza, March 2023
Roses were red and violets use to be blue-
The oceans rose and the world was changed for the new-
The future is cunning and all-knowing but you had no clue-
For what came next shook the books of time-
The past forgotten, and the earth was left abandoned-
Nature is destructive and humble-
But time is ageless-
The past was kind and you didn’t care-
Now you're left in a deep hole of utter putrid despair-
The earth kept going even without you-
For it only became stronger when your extinction was due-
You became like the dinosaurs, your time was up-
The Earth said tough love, for I stop for no one-
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After all, it’s simply a host for the unwanted and corrupt-
So, are you happy with the outcome?
Are you satisfied with you’re choices?
For now, there may never be a future that will ever
Commence-
Future is all-knowing, future is all-knowing
But when it asked for help, you were invisible-
So time stopped for you and everyone,
For the Earth could no longer bear; tick tock, tick tock, tick…
Izaan Raza’s timeline
- February 2024
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28 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2023
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28 TueReceived a critique
on A Message From Future from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Geezer is about the best critic on the site and you’re in good hands with his suggestions for the editing. I too enjoyed the poem and thought it worked well. It can be tighter but it doesn’t need to be tighter as Geezer…" -
28 TueReceived a critique
on A Message From Future from @Geezer
"I like the theme, your rhyme is pretty good but wanders off after the second stanza and again in the fifth and sixth. I suppose that there is precedent for this and don't really mind but it generally poses the question…" -
28 TueFirst publication
A Message From Future
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About me
I'm a student in high school, grade 11 who is taking English and has found an interest in poetry literature.
Location: Ontario
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