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Isabel Agatha
Member since September 12, 2023
Member for 2 years, 8 months
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Sparrow Blues
My tattooed babe is blue.
The world to him was a hullabaloo.
I try to sweep in, my sparrow blue,
But my baby withdrew
As quick as morning dew.
He's unwilling to unscrew
To open and trust.
And for me that's a must,
A concept he can't cusp,
Pick up or even make up.
My babe is blue
While he asks for twos,
Smoking his problems
Singing the blues.
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My baby is blue indeed,
Playing guitar, my Lou reed.
But can’t he see?
My love for him is true,
It’s true.
And don’t you leave me feeling
Blue by you.
Isabel Agatha’s timeline
- September 2024
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12 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2023
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07 Sat
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05 ThuReceived a critique
on drunken hiccups from @paleoray
"Straight out tell it like it is, down right raw, but very descriptive piece. Yes….your poem could easily be set to music and be the next country song hit sensation Isabel. Great writing. Thank you for the post." -
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- September 2023
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13 WedReceived a critique
on drunken hiccups from @Geezer
"has always been my favorite western music instrument. Nice job! ~ Geezer. ." -
12 TueReceived a critique
on drunken hiccups from @Lavender
"Hello, Isabel, Listened to Tex Ritter and read along the lyrics. I agree - great title to go with this raw and genuine piece. Thank you! :" -
12 TueReceived a critique
on drunken hiccups from @Obadiah Grey
"Well, there ya go, There was I about to reply To a time worn ( YEE HAA) Fuula phlegm God fearin gnarly cow girly woman, then, to my surprise, She's from the,,,, Cotswolds!! Original from the title to the poems end. Grea…" -
12 TueFirst publication
drunken hiccups
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12 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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Location: united kingdom
Recent Work
Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
|---|---|---|
| Near L.A | Neopoem Of The Week October 1st to October 7th 2023 | – |
| drunken hiccups | September 2023 New Member Contest | – |