ines

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Walking through

Posted May 24, 2016 · 14 lines · 6 critiques

Happy, happy faces all around
nobdy is sad. Well, who made up feelings?
Who encaged human beings? - Nobody

Look at nature revolving,
look at men not evolving:
names, gods, theories, numbers...
believe whatever you want to believe
Stop. Begin.

I got my mind and that is my biggest problem
I got my heart and that is my biggest empire

I stepped behind and I broke a glass
I rose up and I touched your smile
So cmon keep reaching the unknown
Slide down beneath the doors.

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Received a critique
on Walking through from @lovedly
"So cmon no texting in neopoetry why all first letter caps edit quickly more will read the two great poets have already"
10 Fri

Received a critique
on Walking through from @judyanne
"Welcome again great write.... Happy, happy faces all around nobdy is sad. Well, who made up feelings? Who encaged human beings? - Nobody (I wonder if you need the last 'nobody') I got my mind and that is my biggest prob…"
May 2016
25 Wed

Received a critique
on Walking through from @Sparrow
"Welcome to Neopoet group, your write was as Steve said a bending of thought. Well done and you go ahead and succeed at UNI, makes this old guy jealous that you are at the point of choosing to go to Uni, there is a world…"
25 Wed

First critique offered
on "We Are The World, Of The World" by @Barbara Writes
24 Tue

First publication
Walking through
24 Tue

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"Happy, happy faces all around"
Open thread 14 lines
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Location: reno, Nevada USA, USA

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