ImageWeaver

Member since May 10, 2019

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Blind Trust

Posted May 22, 2021 · 10 lines · 1 critiques

Tomorrow is about trust.
Trusting a stranger
who will slice into my eye
and return sight...
But tonight
tonight is full of nervousness
and fear...
I've never been good at trusting strangers.
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Sharonlee Imageweaver

ImageWeaver’s timeline

May 2024
10 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2022
27 Sun

Received a critique
on Blind Trust from @Candlewitch
"an excellent poem. I felt your reprehension over eye surgery. (I had it done myself) I am uneasy about trusting strangers myself. especially strangers with scalpels! I hope to see you soon and wish your surgery went wel…"
May 2021
23 Sun

Received a critique
on A "Dribble" is half a "Drabble" from @Geezer
"The lines into about equal lengths. is not a requirement, but it is conducive to easier reading. I didn't mean to imply that you should cut them off or rearrange them to make shorter thoughts. ~ Geez. ."
22 Sat

Posted a poem
Blind Trust
"Tomorrow is about trust."
Open thread 10 lines
22 Sat

Critiqued
"Coltrane at the Marina" by @Michael Anthony
"You weave a colourful image with these poetic lines... reminds me of the year I spent living in Airlie Beach. I spent a lot of time on the cliff overlooking the marina. Sharonlee Imageweaver"
22 Sat

Received a critique
on A "Dribble" is half a "Drabble" from @Geezer
"an early morning riser that watches the day slink past. My only complaint is that you should break the lines to make them more or less of equal length. Nice, descriptive narrative! ~ Geez. ."
21 Fri

Posted a poem
A "Dribble" is half a "Drabble"
"A "Dribble" is half a "Drabble"... and a Drabble is 100 words... see Wikipedia"
Open thread 23 lines
14 Fri

Received a critique
on Burn the Diary from @Geezer
"Your thoughts flow like water over the page and ripples wash the grains of truth from the shore and feed them to us poor fishes! Beautiful language and the thought of burning this diary and starting over, means that the…"
14 Fri

Received a critique
on Burn the Diary from @Race_9togo
"So I read the first verse. For me, a poem needs to evoke emotion, and a sense of wonder and timelessness that suspends all perception of duration. The first verse did that for me. So immersed was I in the first verse th…"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Burn the Diary
"Gone midnight at half dimmed moon"
Open thread 24 lines
13 Thu

Critiqued
"TWO SEAT BENCH (narrative poetry shop)" by @scribbler
"I enjoyed reading... you built an atmosphere which was tranquil and thoughtful, moved into a confession of loss and ended with a tender emotive reflection that moved me deeply. Thank you Sharonlee Imageweaver"
05 Wed

Critiqued
"The Painter (Narrative Poetry Workshop)" by @Michael Anthony
"I have always admired Silverstein, he has a clever way with words!"
03 Mon

Critiqued
"The Painter (Narrative Poetry Workshop)" by @Michael Anthony
"... filled with warmth and fond memories. I too feel narratives are usually longer however I find this one is heartfelt and says what you wanted to say. Sharonlee Imageweaver"
03 Mon

Critiqued
"Narrative Shop entry #2 A Day In The Life Of... A pussycat" by @Candlewitch
"And nicely woven in Benny's voice... the loss of a loved one is always wrenching, the sadness ever so real. I feel for you. I can only find comfort in the joy we shared, the quality times, the years of honest caring fam…"
03 Mon

Critiqued
"Rubies In The Stream (Narrative Workshop Poem)" by @Ray Whitaker
"This gave me shivers! Certainly a hard-hitting narrative and not an easy topic to tackle. Well done. I actually found it difficult to read, probably due to my despair and heartache concerning this global chaos. My thoug…"
03 Mon

Received a critique
on "Above Tree’s in Silhouette" - Narrative Workshop from @Geezer
"me! Maybe the way I read it or something. Nobody else seemed to mind. Geez. ."
03 Mon

Received a critique
on "Above Tree’s in Silhouette" - Narrative Workshop from @Ray Whitaker
"I appreciate the time it took to develop the piece. Words well-chosen. I wasn’t really sure that this was from a mother’s point ofview, until the last two stanzas... nice turn there. The opening stanzas are as if from a…"
03 Mon

Received a critique
on There was Yesterday, And Now Today from @Ray Whitaker
"An emotional read, feeling definitely prompted by the piece."
02 Sun

Critiqued
"Deleted: Narrative Shop: A Day In The Life Of... (edited) see added note!" by @Candlewitch
"I hardly think a comment on length is criticism."
01 Sat

Posted a poem
There was Yesterday, And Now Today
"Time is short."
Open thread 11 lines
April 2021
30 Fri

Critiqued
"Secret Humor... [Narrative workshop]" by @Geezer
"Reminiscent of my motherhood days readying four children for school! Sweet tone this one. I'm finding everyone's lines and narratives somewhat short in structure, which has me wondering if I missed an instruction to kee…"
30 Fri

Most-discussed work
"Above Tree’s in Silhouette" - Narrative Workshop

15 critiques to date.
30 Fri

Posted a poem
"Above Tree’s in Silhouette" - Narrative Workshop
"The full moon rose over suburban streets"
Open thread 37 lines
29 Thu

Posted a poem
Time's Memories
"Time came to her late one night"
Open thread 48 lines
15 Thu

Posted a poem
The Dark Eyed Sorceress and DÁIRÍNE Dell
"Dimly lit were the fires one night and somber the gathered souls"
Open thread 116 lines
13 Tue

Posted a poem
When I am Old
"When I am old"
Open thread 11 lines
May 2020
10 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2019
18 Sat

Posted a poem
WinterSoul
"WinterSoul"
Open thread 30 lines
14 Tue

Posted a poem
Zen-ful form of self - evaluation. (May Contest)
"She felt her body with"
Open thread 18 lines
14 Tue

First critique offered
on "Soothing Projections" by @themoonman
10 Fri

First publication
Conversations with The Universe
10 Fri

Posted a poem
Conversations with The Universe
"Greetings all... I feel this is unfinished and maybe a little long-winded... I also seem to always overlook at least one grammatical error, regardless of my diligence..."
Open thread 40 lines
10 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Peaceful Greetings
Aging tree hugging spiritual hippie poet/storyteller/writer/
digital manipulation artist... I just lov to create and inspire and
be inspired.

Location: Australia