ida girl

Member since April 15, 2026

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Dirty fingernails

Posted Jun 2, 2026 · 15 lines · 3 critiques

dirty fingernails

Caress the cross

vacant eyes
squint

Upward

hearing taught

hark

do the angel sing

bloody my sins

is that what holds the key?

June 2026
03 Wed

Received a critique
on Dirty fingernails from @Lavender
"Hello! I agree, the imagery is jarring. I feel the conflict within. Is it possible that you mean "taut" rather than "taught"? Thank you! Lavender"
02 Tue

Received a critique
on Dirty fingernails from @devoejack24
"i don't think i understand "hearing taught...hark..." it's outside of the rest of your images or rather its jarring.. love 'dirty fingernails caress the cross""
02 Tue

Posted a poem
Dirty fingernails
" dirty fingernails"
Open thread 15 lines
May 2026
13 Wed

Received a critique
on A slippery universe from @Geezer
"it took me so long to comment on this. Yeah, what do you need? If I can't help you with what you want, someone here can. I see that you have found how to post a poem, if you can do that, you can post a comment. That is…"
12 Tue

First publication
A slippery universe
12 Tue

Posted a poem
A slippery universe
"Cyber tributaries"
Open thread 6 lines
April 2026
15 Wed

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 27 days later.

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