hopeless_writer

Member since February 27, 2018

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Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]

Posted Feb 7, 2022 · 21 lines · 3 critiques

Consider this a lamentation
A remembrance of a loss
that I grieve for -
One that’s silently felt

No amount of preparation; could
Make seeing the pictures easier,
The hollowness
The fear

Don’t give in - to the temptation
You have have done
the recovery

Find your motivation
I hear the birds again
That chirp had become

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So distant.
Sunlight is not rare

I am my own inspiration
I have climbed a mountain,
Conquered a jungle
And I survived.

This is my new celebration.

hopeless_writer’s timeline

February 2023
27 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2022
21 Mon

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Candlewitch
"it is a very smooth poem, I like the way it flows. there is a bit of self-discovery throughout. it feels like you are concurring and resisting urges to reengage. great language usage! *hugs, Cat"
10 Thu

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Ray Whitaker
"I like the jumble of emotion that I was left with. Reflective. Wistful. I would move your first Stanza to be placed as the third stanza. Keeping the third, just making it the fourth. I wouldn't give away the lamentation…"
07 Mon

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Geezer
"take much cogitation to see that you have written about a lost relationship and probably have come across some pictures that were of happier times during it. You have gotten over it and but still feel a residual ache. T…"
07 Mon

Posted a poem
Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]
"Consider this a lamentation"
Open thread 21 lines
January 2021
09 Sat

Received a critique
on Fuck covid 19 and august from @scribbler
"although easy to give into should never be indulged. I like your poem"
09 Sat

Received a critique
on Fuck covid 19 and august from @Dandini
"Dear Mark, I am sorry to hear you have contracted Covid-19 and I wish you a full recovery."
09 Sat

Received a critique
on Fuck covid 19 and august from @Ray Whitaker
"best wishes for a speedy uncomplicated recovery"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Fuck covid 19 and august from @FreddieM
"I love this the rhyming fits so feel for the emotion you're trying to get across. like a facetime call with a friend seems casually written but can tell the thought and process behind the raw emotions. fist verses seem…"
August 2020
19 Wed

Received a critique
on Fuck covid 19 and august from @Candlewitch
"I agree with Teddy! please enter this in the contest, and good luck! *always, Cat -"
18 Tue

Posted a poem
Fuck covid 19 and august
"I had a life"
Open thread 22 lines
May 2019
01 Wed

Critiqued
"Eerie feel" by @FreddieM
"Loveee this can relate to hard"
April 2019
15 Mon

Posted a poem
try
"Angels fly"
Open thread 12 lines
February 2019
27 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2018
02 Sun

Posted a poem
Spiral
"I gazed at the hole"
Open thread 24 lines
July 2018
25 Wed

Posted a poem
Control
"My hand aches for my phone"
Open thread 13 lines
08 Sun

Critiqued
"Unstuck" by @Conect11
"i really enjoy this poem makes me reflect on a few things in own life great work"
08 Sun

Critiqued
"Elemental Song " by @gregwa8
"i really enjoyed this poem an exellent use of the elemental theme and very vivid and well fitting metaphors"
08 Sun

Critiqued
"Elemental Song " by @gregwa8
"i really enjoyed this poem an exellent use of the elemental theme and very vivid and well fitting metaphors"
04 Wed

Posted a poem
key
"i have many shut doors"
Open thread 19 lines
June 2018
27 Wed

Critiqued
" The Crying Man " by @Eumolpus
"this poem has great vivid imagery and feeling good work!"
18 Mon

Posted a poem
presence
"your words are like a rough rope slowly wrapping around my neck,"
Open thread 11 lines
May 2018
08 Tue

Posted a poem
My “friend”
"I have a friend,l’ve known her all my life,"
Open thread 17 lines
April 2018
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Oak Tree
"The tall oak tree stood on hill alone,"
Open thread 16 lines
March 2018
10 Sat

Critiqued
"Future's not ours to see" by @raj
"this a unique piece of poetry and creates a sense of childhood but also the cruelness of reality .in my opinion the title ''THE LIES WE BELIEVE'' would have suited better but that is just my opinion. over all great poem"
10 Sat

First critique offered
on "Future's not ours to see" by @raj
10 Sat

Most-discussed work
THE CLOCK

11 critiques to date.
10 Sat

Posted a poem
THE CLOCK
"tick-tock tick-tock running out of time,"
Open thread 16 lines
February 2018
27 Tue

First publication
Mistakes...
27 Tue

Posted a poem
Mistakes...
"An eerie shiver,"
Open thread 13 lines
27 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.