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hippiemoon
Member since January 13, 2024
Member for 2 years, 4 months
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Bring me Eggs
Can you pick up some eggs on your way home?
I haven’t heard from you in a while, how have you been?
Sorry, that wasn’t for you.
That’s okay, I hope you’ve been good. Who’s coming home? Do you still live at your parents, or have you moved in with someone new?
I really don’t want to talk to you.
I understand, I know I messed up. I still think of you often. I miss you.
You always knew you messed up, but it never stopped you from hurting me.
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Yeah, well. I was young. And dumb.
So was I. But I never would have done that to you.
You always knew how to love long before I did.
lol
Well, I hope you’re doing well.
Thanks. That was for my boyfriend, by the way. About the eggs.
Oh. Boyfriend.
We broke up years ago. You cheated.
Yeah.
Hello?
Well, let me know if you need those eggs.
hippiemoon’s timeline
- June 2026
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04 ThuReceived a critique
on Bring me Eggs from @Geezer
"totally see this happening. Especially since the last line from the ex asks without asking; "Do you miss me? Why do you still have my number in your phone?" I don't have anything to suggest, other than to look at your l…" -
04 Thu
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Where is Home? from @devoejack24
"I like it as well, but some of your lines are too long. there are breath breaks your missing eg: riding bikes in bikinis around our island. the natural breath is after "bikinis" . i love the opening line and as a person…" -
03 WedReceived a critique
on Where is Home? from @Lavender
"Hello, hippiemoon, Good to see your work again! I think we can all relate to this, no matter where we have lived or are currently living. But I'm always grateful for the memories. I felt this one, too. Thank you, L" -
03 WedReceived a critique
on Where is Home? from @Geezer
"I'm glad to see that you have returned from "Walkabout". Been too long babe, I've missed you. I loved this one. I never rode around in a bikini, or lived on an island, but I felt like I understood the homesickness. Havi…" -
03 WedNew follower
@Geezer
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03 Wed
- October 2025
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30 ThuReceived a critique
on Missing you Again from @Candlewitch
"I feel your loss down to my toes... deeply palpable... so very sorry fondly, Cat" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on Missing you Again from @Lavender
"Hello, hippiemoon, Well said. I'm sorry for your profound loss. Lx" -
28 TueReceived a critique
on Missing you Again from @Geezer
"the rawness of the hurt, the absence of a solid relationship and I understand the need to just get something down. That's okay, I have done that myself and very often find a line that I have 'saved' can be used or rewor…" -
26 SunPosted a poem
Missing you Again
"I’m angry at you for leaving me. I’m angry I didn’t have more time with you. You never got to meet my boyfriend and all the raspberry pastries you loved are long expired. I want you to haunt me. I want glass to shatter, to see you in my corner in the middle of the night, to hear your voice whispering to me on a long day. I hope you’re reunited with your love up there. I hope it’s just like how it was in high school, every kiss, every dance, it’s just like when you were kids. Everything I do, I do for you, yet I still don’t know what my purpose is. I want to love the way you loved. I want to never give up on the people who love me, no matter how tired I am. I want love to surround me until one day it doesn’t, then I finally want to meet you again." - January 2025
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13 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2024
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28 Sat
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Recipe for Love from @Ruby Lord
"Ha ha, how can I not read it with the tune in mind? It's cute, I enjoyed your poem. Ruby xxx :)" -
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- November 2024
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- September 2024
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- August 2024
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05 MonPosted a poem
My Mother’s Kitchen
"I am nineteen years old and I stand at the helm of my mother’s kitchen." -
03 Sat
- July 2024
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26 FriNew follower
@kowque
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13 Sat
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12 Fri
- June 2024
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18 Tue
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08 SatNew follower
@mark
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08 Sat
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04 Tue
- May 2024
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28 TueCritiqued
"Yesterday’s Mail" by @MermaidMaster
"Beautiful poem! I especially love the imagery of the two subjects being like silk threads in starlight. You weave your words in such an elegant manner. I look forward to your next work! Best, hippiemoon" -
25 SatCritiqued
"Helen" by @Alex Tanner
"Lovely poem, Alex!! I can only hope to be desired as you describe in your writing." -
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05 SunCritiqued
"Hands" by @MermaidMaster
"What a BEAUTIFUL poem!! I especially love the imagery of brushing your teeth and getting foam around your mouths. I agree, we never have too many hands for our loved ones :) :) Best, hippiemoon" -
02 ThuCritiqued
"My Worlds" by @MermaidMaster
"This is such a beautiful poem! I love the image of pebbles across the shore like freckles across the bridge of your subject’s nose." - March 2024
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04 Mon
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01 FriCritiqued
"Mr. Barman" by @Tawny023
"Congratulations on your win!! Very well deserved :) Best, hippiemoon" - February 2024
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29 Thu
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29 Thu
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25 SunNew follower
@Lavender
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20 Tue
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20 TueCritiqued
"BEWARE THE PLATFORM OF BIGOTS." by @Alex Tanner
"I enjoyed this poem!! The rhymes were very creative, and I believe it is an important topic to talk about- the bigotry in our world. Thank you for sharing! Best, hippiemoon" -
20 TueCritiqued
"Wildfires " by @Candlewitch
"I really liked this poem!! I think my favorite lines were “your heart, like a songbird trapped in a guided cage...” It really encapsulates someone wanting to love you but not knowing how. Wonderfully done!! -hippiemoon" -
15 ThuHighest posting month
February 2024 — 6 poems
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04 Sun
- January 2024
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17 WedFirst critique offered
on "Aging" by @MermaidMaster
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13 SatFirst publication
who i am (since unpublished)
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13 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
hey guys! i’m a college student and for a long time, music and poetry have been releases for me. i’m here after poetizer switched to a subscription based service and can’t wait to read all of your amazing poems!
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