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Heartfelt
Member since November 25, 2014
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The Sweet smell of Success
What does it smell like
Hmmmmm
what can I liken to the Sweet smell of success
After all of the mess
You can now
Laugh at their plot
Because now
They have to watch
you now
All for a season of corruption
Let them throw the stumbling blocks
Let them sit in the seat of the scornful
Let them eat the fruit of their dark labor
You can smile at their disruptions
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You can sit back and savor
while in darkness
they toil and labor
in vain
Like the sweet smell of chocolate wafting in the loop
Like the sweet smell of roses in bloom on a walk with your lover in the afternoon
Like the sweet smell of rain gently falling in June
the Sweet smell of success
Heartfelt’s timeline
- November 2024
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25 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- August 2022
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12 FriReceived a critique
on The Sweet smell of Success from @lovedly
"three LETS AND THREE LOVES would prove you are a ROMANTIC LOVER This is your maiden poem I've read in years" - April 2021
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25 SunReceived a critique
on The Sweet smell of Success from @c lynn brooks
"Is over used in trhis poem. Your rhyming ?afternoon.June. That is just as rasping as moon June,spoon etc try being a bit more creative in your writin. Use your own voice do not resort to superficial rhyme. I have a feel…" -
24 SatReceived a critique
on The Sweet smell of Success from @Gracy
"Good poem for the smell contest, Heartfelt. I suggest you eliminate some repetitions, for the sake of the readers' attention. As below, I put between brackets a few unnecessary bits. Just suggesting! Enjoyed, Gracy All…" -
22 ThuReceived a critique
on The Sweet smell of Success from @Ray Whitaker
"In the lines 4-11, to allude to some kind of event. It would be useful to the reader if there was something to grab on to in those lines. Like the ending!" -
22 ThuCritiqued
"WHEN I AM OLD (challenge contest)" by @scribbler
"I THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME UNTIL YOU SAID TURDS" -
22 ThuCritiqued
"WHEN I AM OLD (challenge contest)" by @scribbler
"I THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME UNTIL YOU SAID TURDS" -
22 ThuFirst critique offered
on "WHEN I AM OLD (challenge contest)" by @scribbler
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21 Wed
- November 2019
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25 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2019
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13 Sat
- June 2018
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08 Fri
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08 Fri
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07 ThuReceived a critique
on Affliction from @raj
"I believe this is my first visit into your poetic domain. True to its title "Affliction" the poem emotes in random motion giving a notion of no holds barred recount of experiences during a relationship...will make me ke…" -
07 ThuReceived a critique
on Affliction from @Barbara Writes
"Left brained is logical and egotistical. We want what we want when we want it and how we want it. As for right brained we just love whether we get our way with another or not. And the best way to live is love self first…" -
06 Wed
- November 2015
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25 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2014
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15 Mon
- November 2014
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28 Fri
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25 TueFirst publication
Affliction
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25 Tue
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25 Tue
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25 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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RuthlessRomantic
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The Sweet smell of Success
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The Sweet smell of Success
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Sweetest Confections Confession
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Purify
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Resonance
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Noble and Ignoble
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Affliction
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Workshops
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| Renga 18 (Rain/Raindrops) | (syllabus) | Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool | Started 2018-06-01 | Concluded |