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Heart- Filled
Member since March 9, 2019
Member for 7 years, 2 months
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My Heart Needs You
Day after day
I think about you
Night after night
I toss in my sleep
Thinking,
Wondering what I mean to you
When you are away
I cry myself to sleep
Lo and behold I
Silently weep
For my heart cries out
Your name
But deep inside I'm feeling
The same
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As I've done when we first met
Baby there is so many mistakes
That I regret
The good we shared
Together brought
Happiness to my mind
The sound of your voice
Always Helped me
to unwind
The way you brought
Peace deep within
My heart
Baby my love for you
Shall never part
My heart needs you
Right here by my side
Cause you have been
So good to me
I won't say goodbye
The happiness you stir
Within me
Makes my heart
Desire to only be
Yours and only yours
Until the end of my time
My heart needs you
And the love
You know we share
Cause baby you know
How much I do care
My heart needs you
Even when I've seemed
to fail you
I'm still here for
You always and forevermore
My heart needs you
To hold me when I cry
Cause without you
I just want to die
( END)
Heart- Filled’s timeline
- March 2024
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09 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2020
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09 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2019
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12 MonReceived a critique
on My Heart Needs You from @scribbler
"And welcome to Neo. I liked the feelings conveyed because they seem honest. I would suggest you break this up into stanzas,.By doing so you give the reader a break here and there to pause and think about what they just…" -
12 MonReceived a critique
on My Heart Needs You from @weirdelf
"tell me more about who you've been reading, I've read a lot and might be able to help." -
12 MonReceived a critique
on Take My Hand from @weirdelf
"ok, you reckon you do read poetry? Who are your favourite English language poets and why? Who are you reading now? Love poetry is the hardest of all to write because it has been done so often by so many of the bests. Th…" - July 2019
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20 SatFirst critique offered
on "Prince" (since unpublished) by @Laura Trueman
- March 2019
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27 Wed
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09 SatFirst publication
Take My Hand
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09 Sat
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09 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I have been writing poetry since 1993...I have talent to word my poetry the way I want but it just seems like its maybe either too long or its not poetry its music im writing.. i started writng music at the age of 22...Gospel and Love music
Location: United States of America, USA
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Workshops
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| Cellar Door | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2019-03-27 | Concluded |