Halcyon

Member since March 21, 2018

Member for 8 years, 2 months

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3 Poems

15 Comments

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Halcyon’s timeline

March 2023
21 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2019
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Blah from @themoonman
"I can almost smell the salt thanks for posting"
08 Tue

Critiqued
"Sleeping Wind " by @chima ononogbu
"The perfect title and one that drew me in amongst your other offerings. And here I am nearly a month gone by since first posting to give you accolades in this sleepy place. "Crazy birds blow furry" so true in their year…"
September 2019
14 Sat

Received a critique
on Blah from @chima ononogbu
"Good imagery and well thought out work."
March 2019
21 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2018
16 Mon

Received a critique
on eh from @weirdelf
"but even though I'm a skeptic and and atheist I'm pretty good at mysticism. Really glad to see you giving so much feedback. You are becoming a very valuable member."
06 Fri

Critiqued
"Honky Tonk Queen" by @valene
"That was a fun story-poem from beginning to end. Enjoyed."
06 Fri

Critiqued
"Work In Progress - 2" by @raj
"It is difficult to write erotica without effacing the fear of judgment. You have the ability but there is a hesitation to allow us fully into your fantasy. That always kills a hot mess. So how do you write erotica or an…"
05 Thu

Received a critique
on eh from @Rula
"Sorry this hasn't attract more comments. I think this is a new take of the theme, or that what I thought.it has a surrealistic sense to it, at least for me. Let's see what others might say. Wish you the best."
05 Thu

Critiqued
"The Melancholy Blues " by @themoonman
"Nice trip down memory lane. I liked your use of allusion to Elton John and The Beatles songs. The first more obvious than the second. "One more Train" takes me to the "Picture yourself on a train in a station" line in L…"
04 Wed

Received a critique
on nothing here from @themoonman
"Wow, smartly stirring creating connections ... thanks for sharing with us, I'm going to listen to the elfman's read right now."
04 Wed

Critiqued
"Boys can be bulimic too" by @scooby
"A gem deserves the effort. Thank you raj."
04 Wed

Critiqued
"Boys can be bulimic too" by @scooby
"On a pedestal, I place this poem to live a life all it's own. A compliment to the poet for a very special piece. What did you think of my title? -The alliteration of "boys/bulimic," pops perfectly off the lips. - I, per…"
03 Tue

Critiqued
"Spring? (April's Contest)" by @Rula
"Winter is definitely winning at the moment. I like how your poem captures the struggle in transition between winter and spring. Then adding "When media comes up with Only good news," that makes it special on another lev…"
03 Tue

Critiqued
"LAST PARTY" by @scribbler
"Your poem captured my interest from beginning to end and I couldn't agree more with your message. The word "dirges" is worth a gold coin amongst the rest of the vocabulary used. Nice writing."
02 Mon

First critique offered
on "Symptoms of Testosterone, Part 2" by @weirdelf
March 2018
31 Sat

Received a critique
on nothing here from @weirdelf
"What an impressive first write, welcome to Neopoet. This is gorgeous work and it took me flying with you. The elegance of your use of assonance and consonance demonstrate well developed word skills, this is clearly not…"
21 Wed

First publication
nothing here (since unpublished)
21 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

Halcyon

Halcyon’s timeline

5 years of membership

on Blah from @themoonman

"Sleeping Wind " by @chima ononogbu

on Blah from @chima ononogbu

One year of membership

on eh from @weirdelf

"Honky Tonk Queen" by @valene

"Work In Progress - 2" by @raj

on eh from @Rula

"The Melancholy Blues " by @themoonman

on nothing here from @themoonman

"Boys can be bulimic too" by @scooby

"Boys can be bulimic too" by @scooby

"Spring? (April's Contest)" by @Rula

"LAST PARTY" by @scribbler

on "Symptoms of Testosterone, Part 2" by @weirdelf

on nothing here from @weirdelf

nothing here (since unpublished)

Membership begins

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