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Genuine Breath
Member since February 8, 2011
Member for 15 years, 3 months
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Free Haiku
A delicate rose,
memories drifting.
Alas, November rain.
Free Haiku (C) Maref
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15 years of membership
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5 years of membership
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- November 2011
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29 TueReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @weirdelf
""Don't throw the baby out with the bathwater" yes, you got it right first time, as a haiku should be, but thank you for considering my thoughts." -
29 TueReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @weirdelf
"somehow I feel it could be just a bit better. It's the first line bothers me A delicate rose, is just a tad cliche, perhaps there is another way to state its ephemerality? Maybe even ephemeral rose or lingering rose or…" -
26 SatReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @Geezer
"the picture right away! Very effective Haiku! ~ Geezer" -
26 SatFirst publication
Free Haiku
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26 Sat
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04 FriFirst critique offered
on "Memorabilia" by @Kailashana2
- February 2011
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08 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 291 days later.
About Me
About me
A poetess and a translator, passionate about all types of poetry, particularly the poetry forms...
Location: Libya, LBY
Favorite Poets
E. E. Cummings
T. S. Eliot
Pablo Neruda
Khalil Gibran
Ghada Al Samman and Maya Angelou.
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