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Genuine Breath
Member since February 8, 2011
Member for 15 years, 3 months
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A delicate rose,
memories drifting.
Alas, November rain.
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- December 2011
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02 FriCritiqued
"Ekphrastic poetry ??" by @yenti
"I think you managed to make it, one of the hard types of poetry... So far I wrote only two, inspired by Dali and Tissot! To be truthful, as far as I know, usually they are written in the pattern of paragraphs( prose lik…" -
02 FriCritiqued
"To be human" by @weirdelf
"What are your thoughts about the overuse of "I"? A dear mentor (on another poetry site) once told me that, it's the poet's biggest trap... I have been reading your verses today, I stopped at this one because I deeply li…" -
02 FriCritiqued
"All Alone..." by @Geezer
"Honestly I thought it "The old man and the sea" is the novel which inspired you! Smooth rhyme and beautifully composed words." -
01 Thu
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01 ThuCritiqued
"Finding Grace" by @Eduardo Cruz
"I found this to be a very genuine piece of poetry, I envy those who can write rhymed verses smoothly, it almost made my day, thanks for sharing!" - November 2011
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29 TueReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @weirdelf
""Don't throw the baby out with the bathwater" yes, you got it right first time, as a haiku should be, but thank you for considering my thoughts." -
29 TueReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @weirdelf
"somehow I feel it could be just a bit better. It's the first line bothers me A delicate rose, is just a tad cliche, perhaps there is another way to state its ephemerality? Maybe even ephemeral rose or lingering rose or…" -
26 SatReceived a critique
on Free Haiku from @Geezer
"the picture right away! Very effective Haiku! ~ Geezer" -
26 SatFirst publication
Free Haiku
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26 Sat
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04 FriCritiqued
"Memorabilia" by @Kailashana2
"~those memories of your fingertips we never speak of~ ^ I found those tender lines my favorite in this romantic verse, thank you for sharing, it's been a while and I'm glad this beauty was the first thing to read." -
04 FriFirst critique offered
on "Memorabilia" by @Kailashana2
- February 2011
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08 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 291 days later.
About Me
About me
A poetess and a translator, passionate about all types of poetry, particularly the poetry forms...
Location: Libya, LBY
Favorite Poets
E. E. Cummings
T. S. Eliot
Pablo Neruda
Khalil Gibran
Ghada Al Samman and Maya Angelou.
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