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Gavin Singh
Member since October 12, 2022
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Trick or Treat
Scary skeletons satisfy their sweet tooths,
With the plings and plongs of hard candy
Playing on ribs like xylophones.
Wicked witches wander wide
With spells to find the
Tricks and treats the night may hide.
Vicious vampires vibrantly gallivant
From one door to another collecting
Sweet treats in lieu of tricks.
Wild werewolves whiff wonderous
Scents of cinnamon, candy and confections
Amidst the dim, dark orange lights.
Ghastly ghosts gather in groups
To tell tall tales of the living
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Who haunts their old haunts.
Mischievous mummies moan of mold
With outstretched arms stiff and wrapped
Counting their candies in wrappers of gold.
The dawning light lightens the night
And the jack-o-lanterns bright smiles
Cease to flicker, ending the fright.
Gavin Singh’s timeline
- October 2023
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12 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2022
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13 ThuReceived a critique
on Trick or Treat from @Lavender
"Hello, Gavin! I agree with the others - a fun read! Your alliteration is great, but is also logical and makes sense. Your first stanza is a perfect opening - lending the rest of the poem to follow in theme and humor. We…" -
13 ThuReceived a critique
on Trick or Treat from @Geezer
"is always fun. I like your little tale of Trick or Treat. If this is meant to be one of the Random Challenges, you should go to the drop-down and enter it as being in the Random Challenges, otherwise, you will not be aw…" -
13 ThuReceived a critique
on Trick or Treat from @Jackweb
"Wow! This is masterfully penned piece! Alliteration always gives a piece of writing a lulling, lyrical and or emotive effect. Beautiful! ." -
13 ThuReceived a critique
on Trick or Treat from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Really tight organized poem. Can’t really suggest any changes. Definitely a fun read. Tim" -
12 WedFirst publication
Trick or Treat
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12 WedJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am from Guyana but now I live in New York. I just write for fun, and to look for new ways to express ideas.
Location: NY
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