Frenchf

Member since December 15, 2012

Member for 13 years, 5 months

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39 Poems

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Procreate

Posted Apr 21, 2013 · 18 lines · 3 critiques

Fate
The first date
He couldn't wait
To mate
Not procreate
But sate
Now she's late
He hates
The rate
Growth generates
Her belly emanates
Baby evacuates
Don't Commiserate
His Mood elevates
He recreates
That first date
And the first mate
Fate

Frenchf’s timeline

December 2022
15 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
December 2017
15 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
December 2013
15 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2013
22 Mon

Received a critique
on Procreate from @loved
"the gal more than the guy guys don't like .........................condoms but if women don't too then who will you ................... condem((((((n tell the whole world too that's why I profess all women to carry a gr…"
22 Mon

Received a critique
on Procreate from @Rula
"Backer was one of the best tennis players, but he lately had scandles and complicated issues with women hadn't he? Loved the write but two tiny things irritate: * the repetition of the word "fate" I think one of them ca…"
21 Sun

Received a critique
on Procreate from @Ian.T
"Procreate, well I usually say here that I never did but I was married at the time so I suppose it was ok, lol. Loved the stories in one part of the Bible where it seemed a free for all and many were begating this, that…"
21 Sun

Critiqued
"FELONY?" by @scribbler
"my father willed to me and I pass it on to my own son "And I will pass on----perhaps a better alternative. Otherwise good write"
21 Sun

Critiqued
"My Song is Very Real" by @docmaverick
"Do you use your poems as lyrics?"
21 Sun

Critiqued
"Looking Over You" by @paul
"Heaven and unfortunate events."
21 Sun

Posted a poem
Procreate
"Fate"
Open thread 18 lines
20 Sat

Critiqued
"The Rotting Ballerina" by @EvaPersephone
"It disturbs and pleases which is a good reaction. Thank you for sharing"
20 Sat

Critiqued
"opaque dreams" by @Seren
"As it meant to. It would do well for a prayer!interesting"
20 Sat

Critiqued
"An Attimood Towards An Intermood Whilste, Feeling Ludey" by @docmaverick
"R piece? We're you in a strange mood? Not your USUSAL work. Trying to vary it?"
20 Sat

Critiqued
"p r e m o n i t i o n " by @Esker
"Addition to the piece."
20 Sat

Critiqued
"HEARTBEAT CONSTITUTES LIVING" by @kittymchale
"Which I like. I like all your interesting work"
09 Tue

Received a critique
on The globe from @Ian.T
"The Bind Moggles, There I was thinking what could I be A bauble on a Xmas tree Then I thought how small of me. Now I is settled on what to be A bleeding great ball to see liberty, La la Loved the sight I mean the write…"
09 Tue

Received a critique
on The globe from @weirdelf
"I shiny light and a naked body. What more is needed for fine poetry?"
07 Sun

Received a critique
on The globe from @Geezer
"worry about the "expose...d" part. It's just that we haven't been exposed to it before. I thought it a very imaginative way to continue the rhyme. ~ Geezer"
07 Sun

Received a critique
on The globe from @Seren
"I really liked this write the only boggle I have is that it should be broken down into stanza's to give it more punch, just an idea if you dont agree just ignore me lol I hate seeing me in all poses Most of all my body…"
06 Sat

Posted a poem
The globe
"There is a globe above my head"
Open thread 24 lines
March 2013
31 Sun

Received a critique
on Me analysis from @Ian.T
"A good write, and a bad write, Yours, Yenti, Sparrow and Ian.T. He, He, He.. guess which belongs to me.."
31 Sun

Posted a poem
Me analysis
"Sometimes I think"
Open thread 21 lines
27 Wed

Posted a poem
Why should I?
"For what reason should I put my mouth"
Open thread 19 lines
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Three blind mice alternative
"Three gay men ,"
Open thread 30 lines
21 Thu

Posted a poem
Brain functionality
"There is a the mind that reads one line and imagines scenes quite vividly"
Open thread 7 lines
16 Sat

Posted a poem
The attraction of the construction worker
"Worship the scaffolder he has an art"
Open thread 18 lines
15 Fri

Posted a poem
Legal eagle
"Yesterday I stood in court"
Open thread 40 lines
13 Wed

New follower
@docmaverick
12 Tue

Posted a poem
Mother love senryu
"On the phone overheard"
Open thread 3 lines
09 Sat

Posted a poem
The old pervert
"The old codger sat"
Open thread 19 lines
02 Sat

Posted a poem
Plastic operation
"nails smell of layered shellac"
Open thread 16 lines
February 2013
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Fetish fascination
"Why does the slipper thrill you so?"
Open thread 14 lines
25 Mon

New follower
@lonlyhrtsclub13
January 2013
15 Tue

Highest posting month
January 2013 — 14 poems
14 Mon

New follower
@Seren
03 Thu

Most-discussed work
Intimacy

23 critiques to date.
December 2012
25 Tue

New follower
@weirdelf
25 Tue

First critique offered
on "that whimper we keep hearing about" by @the_fool
15 Sat

First publication
Child Abuse
15 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I am a factual poetess divorced with various projects and an intelligence which is currently unfulfilled
I am a very nice person because I care what happens to others and am very principled. I dont do drugs or sex(well almost!) or anything else and try to keep healthy and happy
When I was a little girl I read a lady called Patience strong who said
"Let me do what I can now for I shall not pass this way again"
That is what I am adhering to

Location: Uk south east London

Favorite Poets

Wilde

Keats

Shakespeare

Benjamin Zephaniah

Browning Elizabeth Barrett and Robert

Turkish poetry

rudyard Kipling

arctic monkey song lyrics

Pam Ayres

Donne

Beatles Simon and Garfunkel song lyrics

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on Procreate from @loved

on Procreate from @Rula

on Procreate from @Ian.T

"FELONY?" by @scribbler

"My Song is Very Real" by @docmaverick

"Looking Over You" by @paul

"The Rotting Ballerina" by @EvaPersephone

"opaque dreams" by @Seren

"An Attimood Towards An Intermood Whilste, Feeling Ludey" by @docmaverick

"p r e m o n i t i o n " by @Esker

"HEARTBEAT CONSTITUTES LIVING" by @kittymchale

on The globe from @Ian.T

on The globe from @weirdelf

on The globe from @Geezer

on The globe from @Seren

on Me analysis from @Ian.T

January 2013 — 14 poems

on "that whimper we keep hearing about" by @the_fool

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