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Eulekia
Member since July 25, 2017
Member for 8 years, 10 months
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The Night Before Day Break
The Night before Day Break
it was dark, so dark
The moon refused to give its light
A dark and Silent Sky
A Slight twinkling of star light
A cool breeze began to blow
Heralding the break of down
Soon it was twilight
And the day began to break
Eulekia’s timeline
- October 2023
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13 FriReceived a critique
on The Night Before Day Break from @Geezer
"both counts, Triske. I understand the use of twilight, in this case, because the sun is just below the rim of the Earth. ~ Geezer. ." -
13 FriReceived a critique
on The Night Before Day Break from @Triskelion
"..your use of the word "twilight" because I had always thought of this being toward evening. On top of that, I also learned there are also three phases of twilight, so thanks for that. I like the general feel of your vo…" -
13 Fri
- July 2022
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25 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2019
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10 Thu
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10 Thu
- July 2019
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24 WedReceived a critique
on The gambler from @weirdelf
"Perhaps the consequences on others in the gamblers life? Perhaps the consequences on other aspects of the gamblers life? It really is an insidious addiction, you can only drink so much or die, or shoot so much heroin or…" -
24 WedReceived a critique
on The gambler from @Marthalyn
"Your poem is short but poignant and the meaning is clear. The addiction to gambling is a horrific thing for anyone to bear. I think your switching between third-person and first-person point of view ads, even more, inte…" -
24 WedNew follower
@Marthalyn
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23 Tue
- May 2019
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24 FriCritiqued
"Travel Well, Grandpa" by @Benjamin Velasco
"Dear Benjamin Velasco I like your poem Grandpa and would like to follow up more of your poems. Eulekia" - March 2019
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21 ThuReceived a critique
on New Year's Day from @Cloudthings
"& how swiftly this year has flown by & this little gem has been sitting unnoticed... until now! I really like it. Simply straight forward - The only suggestion I might offer is to split the last line & thus take more ad…" - February 2019
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20 WedReceived a critique
on Like a jewel from @Geezer
"of short, simple verse and stories, but this seems a little extreme. I felt like I was looking at "sparklies" through the eyes of a raven or magpie. When you see them in that light, they are indeed, a jewel. I need some…" -
18 MonCritiqued
"Angels sings" by @Barbara Writes
"Dear Barbara I like your poem Angel sings. I too believe in Angels watching over us all. Instead of natures creatures know my name you could say Heavenly creatures know my name. Eulekia" -
18 Mon
- January 2019
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29 TueReceived a critique
on The Wanderer from @weirdelf
"We need to know more of what you want then. You say "I love poetry and would like to share my poetry with other people" but to share it with others they will have to want to read it. Which poets inspired you? Who do you…" -
29 TueCritiqued
"Aura Star" by @chevyvent
"I like your poem. Especially the part that you say " I exist like a vapour then I am no more" keep writing Chevyvent. Eulekia" -
29 Tue
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24 ThuCritiqued
"BLACKBIRD (acrostic)" by @scribbler
"Dear Scribbler I like your poem Black Bird. Send more poems in. Eulekia" -
24 ThuCritiqued
"Magic Night" by @WonderWoods
"Dear Wonderwoods I like your poem Magic night. You could have included some talk about the moon. Eulekia" -
24 Thu
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07 MonCritiqued
"Love Is My Muse (Burst On Edge)" by @chevyvent
"I Lijke your poem. It gives a good description of love. Keep writing Mario" -
07 Mon
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07 Mon
- December 2018
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28 Fri
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22 Sat
- October 2018
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04 Thu
- September 2018
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06 ThuPosted a poem
Princess Petra
"Her hair shone golden like the sun Her clothes of threads finely spun When she spoke her voice was soft Like music to the ears When she walked she walked with grace That suited one so fair of face She won the hearts of all she knew Their darling Princess Petra" - August 2018
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27 MonPosted a poem
In the desert
"Like hot coals on my feet I felt the desert sand As I walked barefoot I put my sandals on my feet My throat was parched with thirst I took a drink of water from the keg I had brought along My back pack felt heavy in my hands As I put it on my back strength I did not lack Not far to go soon see the tents arranged row by row With a hot meal and stories that appeal" -
02 ThuCritiqued
"Rain/Raindrops Renga 18" by @Barbara Writes
"Dear Barbara do you like my poem walking in the night? You can contact me at my email address [email protected] Eulekia" - July 2018
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25 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2018
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10 WedFirst critique offered
on "HOPE (January Contest)" by @Simon
- August 2017
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15 TueFirst publication
The Rainbow
- July 2017
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25 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 21 days later.
About Me
About me
I love poetry and would like to share my poetry with other people
Location: Nigeria, NGA
Favorite Poets
William Shakespear
William Morris
Recent Work
Princess Petra
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In the desert
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Walkiing in the night
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Dreams
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The Rainbow
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Contest Wins
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