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Essorant
Member since March 30, 2012
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- April 2012
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06 FriCritiqued
"capitalism " by @judyanne
"Yes, dactyls (Greek fingers) :) You are right on the mark in most places. NOW it has COME to a POOR SAD afFAIR (Acceptable. I think it would be better with an unstressed syllable for "SAD") TELLing you THIS while I'm SA…" -
02 MonCritiqued
"WOODBINE'S SCULPTURE (3rd sonnet attempt) [meter workshop]" by @scribbler
"I like this. It is not a bad attempt, but there are quite a few outstanding deviations from the iambic meter: (Capitalized syllables/words below are the stresses. The bolded syllables are the syllables that succeed as b…" -
02 MonCritiqued
"WOODBINE'S SCULPTURE (3rd sonnet attempt) [meter workshop]" by @scribbler
"Sorry, I thought it said bold tags would work in "advanced formatting", but they didn't work in my comment above. Edit: Fixed (for the most part)" -
02 MonFirst critique offered
on "WOODBINE'S SCULPTURE (3rd sonnet attempt) [meter workshop]" by @scribbler
- March 2012
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30 FriJoined Neopoet
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