dpoetessrock

Member since March 21, 2019

Member for 7 years, 2 months

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9 Poems

18 Comments

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Rubber Band Man

Posted May 4, 2019 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

Toting jeans hanky and chaps
thin man rubbing solo band
harmonica in two hands
airing throat commands
guitar metal stands

hoovering crowd
boogie down
snapping loud
sip'n SanGria

rubber band
brother man
roughly fingering
street melodies
coins stroken
bucket notes posted
feather dusting
bass guitar
footing the bills.

dpoetessrock’s timeline

March 2024
21 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
March 2020
21 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2019
15 Wed

Received a critique
on Rubber Band Man from @Pugilist
"A consideration might be to vary your stanza and line length, to juxtapose longer lines with shorter ones and create a flow that draws the reader through. But, ultimately, I'm not certain where you are going or what poi…"
04 Sat

Posted a poem
Rubber Band Man
"Toting jeans hanky and chaps"
Open thread 18 lines
April 2019
22 Mon

Critiqued
"ONE DROP OF LOVE LEFT" by @Drey Hommies
"One drop is all i need from love I like the rhythm n it gave me a smile. Thanks for sharing."
22 Mon

First critique offered
on "ONE DROP OF LOVE LEFT" (since unpublished) by @Drey Hommies
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @Geezer
"said it better "Big E"."
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Greeting Outdoors from @Geezer
"Yup! ~ Geezer. ."
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Greeting Outdoors from @brittle light
"cool as a cucumber and mint julep sighs relaxed as a dove gliding crystal clear skies fun as a bunny courting an owl no leash laws allowed for words on the prowl your words corralled your prey subject well excuse my sil…"
05 Fri

Posted a poem
Greeting Outdoors
"hoovering above"
Open thread 26 lines
04 Thu

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @zebra
"Your adorable :) Such a fast transition ...Does your question imply this is not your poem but an inspiration to you written by another; or are you being coy? haahaahaa Well whether it is yours or not I will comment this…"
04 Thu

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @Eumolpus
"I think that's part of our process, and it's good to relax and just enjoy word play. I'm sure many of the poems in the canon began that way. I thought the poem was a fast enjoyable read, and light verse. Some of our poe…"
04 Thu

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @Geezer
"with Zebra about letting go and finding yourself. I mainly stick with rhyme, but occasionally I break out with some free style and let fly! I also have become unafraid to soar with different topics and find myself just…"
04 Thu

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @zebra
"This is just my opinion, so it only matters if it moves you and pls remember this is a workshop so we all hear from each other about the good bad and ugly So I liked the first one and I like the second one and now Im fe…"
03 Wed

Most-discussed work
Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu]

11 critiques to date.
03 Wed

Posted a poem
Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu]
"bean soup"
Open thread 23 lines
March 2019
29 Fri

Posted a poem
Cellar Door
"Fit for a king in his castle, a strong cellar door."
Open thread 6 lines
27 Wed

New follower
@Heart- Filled
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Polar Vortex
"Courting countries"
Open thread 28 lines
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Therapeutic Sea
"Drifting on the lonely sea"
Open thread 33 lines
24 Sun

Posted a poem
Culture Vultures
"whats hot to be got"
Open thread 24 lines
21 Thu

First publication
Taking In The Day
21 Thu

Posted a poem
Taking In The Day
"scraping the sky"
Open thread 22 lines
21 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
15 Fri

Highest posting month
March 2019 — 5 poems

About Me

About me

I am very ambitious and I love poetry. I write poems and I wrote my autobiography up to age 50 with faith and dreams of becoming a published author in the near future.

Location: Baltimore/Maryland USA