dpoetessrock

Member since March 21, 2019

Member for 7 years, 2 months

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9 Poems

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Rubber Band Man

Posted May 4, 2019 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

Toting jeans hanky and chaps
thin man rubbing solo band
harmonica in two hands
airing throat commands
guitar metal stands

hoovering crowd
boogie down
snapping loud
sip'n SanGria

rubber band
brother man
roughly fingering
street melodies
coins stroken
bucket notes posted
feather dusting
bass guitar
footing the bills.

dpoetessrock’s timeline

March 2024
21 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
March 2020
21 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2019
15 Wed

Received a critique
on Rubber Band Man from @Pugilist
"A consideration might be to vary your stanza and line length, to juxtapose longer lines with shorter ones and create a flow that draws the reader through. But, ultimately, I'm not certain where you are going or what poi…"
04 Sat

Posted a poem
Rubber Band Man
"Toting jeans hanky and chaps"
Open thread 18 lines
April 2019
22 Mon

First critique offered
on "ONE DROP OF LOVE LEFT" (since unpublished) by @Drey Hommies
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu] from @Geezer
"said it better "Big E"."
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Greeting Outdoors from @Geezer
"Yup! ~ Geezer. ."
05 Fri

Posted a poem
Greeting Outdoors
"hoovering above"
Open thread 26 lines
03 Wed

Most-discussed work
Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu]

11 critiques to date.
03 Wed

Posted a poem
Cold Sandwiches & Soups [Menu]
"bean soup"
Open thread 23 lines
March 2019
21 Thu

First publication
Taking In The Day
21 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
15 Fri

Highest posting month
March 2019 — 5 poems

About Me

About me

I am very ambitious and I love poetry. I write poems and I wrote my autobiography up to age 50 with faith and dreams of becoming a published author in the near future.

Location: Baltimore/Maryland USA