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doprific
Member since March 13, 2010
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Goodbye again
I know that Im not,
the love that you want.
The butterffly effects,
a image that haunts.
The one that you think of,
even when you are not.
The love you truly deserve,
that can not be bought.
I just know these things,
are on their way to you.
Cause karma can be a bitch,
but its got your back too!!
I know you will say,
I dont want or even need.
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Its nothing to be ashamed of,
and goes perfect with weed.
I do miss you enormous,
and regret my mistakes.
But if all works out for you,
there wil be no more fakes..
Your an ideal woman,
who takes care of her man.
Not cause she has to,
but beacause she can.
So next good guy in,
better appreciate and earn.
The trust you will give him,
at each and every turn.
He'll handle the nagging,
and ask please for some more.
Cause you stupid asshole,
She isnt your whore.
I can go on for hours,
but no need to indeed.
Im not begging for forgivness,
or even asking please.
In my heart we tried,
just not meant to be.
Different time or circumstance,
well then just maybe.
.
Just wanted to say goodbye,
to my friend and my foe.
You will always be my lover,
and my closet ho.
Theres no need to keep hanging,
we know where that leads.
My head in ur crotch,
and you upon your knees.
Just stick to your guns,
never waiver to settle.
Your true love is out there,
and promise wont meddle.
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- February 2014
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04 TueReceived a critique
on Goodbye again from @Race_9togo
"Thankfully, they were on the old site, before the crash, so I cannot oblige you ;) heehee" -
04 TueReceived a critique
on Goodbye again from @alidzain
"How about a few examples of the" god-awful drive"?. Maybe we can all learn from them...;) Alid" -
03 MonReceived a critique
on Goodbye again from @Race_9togo
"In general, I like this piece quite a bit. There's a whimsical, fatalistic bitterness to it that I really enjoy, and it shocks very well, when it gets explicit. The theme is pretty well-worn, used a lot in poems, but yo…" -
03 MonReceived a critique
on Goodbye again from @Ian.T
"A ramble through the emotions of life. I expect you will feel better now you have written it down. I think that this piece can be used as a measure for your future poems. There is no need for us to go into the why's and…" -
03 MonReceived a critique
on Goodbye again from @alidzain
"if writing this helps you to be at ease, then how could it be stupid? Alid" -
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- March 2011
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12 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2010
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- March 2010
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13 SatReceived a critique
on break the cycle from @Seren
"I am speachless ... breaking the cycle the first step to healing kind regards Jayne-Chloe welcome to Neopoet" -
13 SatReceived a critique
on break the cycle from @themoonman
"Welcome to the site. This poem has a powerful theme but could stand some editing, there are some words misspelled and some of the flow is contradicted by the length of lines, making it not flow evenly when read aloud, b…" -
13 SatFirst publication
break the cycle
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