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Dejan Jung
Member since April 26, 2022
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NIGHT GEOMETRY
Every drop of a broken faucet
make noise in my head,
the shadows shift on the skin,
on your face - night geometry.
Are you crying?
You are laughing?
Do you hate me?
I hate myself more,
and I'm only happy when I close my eyes,
then I don’t count the looks
you share with others.
Dejan Jung’s timeline
- April 2023
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26 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2022
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30 SatReceived a critique
on NIGHT GEOMETRY from @Ray Whitaker
"I am looking forward to reading more of you. i liked this piece, short and succinct." -
27 WedReceived a critique
on NIGHT GEOMETRY from @Candlewitch
"Woof...very powerful stuff!! I agree with what Geezer said. *hugs, Cat p.s. welcome!" -
26 TueReceived a critique
on NIGHT GEOMETRY from @Geezer
"let me welcome you to Neo. Second, I like the way that you combined all the nuances in one brief poem. Lying awake at night the dripping faucet and the sound make[s] noise in your head. I know those sounds that keep you…" -
26 TueFirst publication
NIGHT GEOMETRY
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26 TueJoined Neopoet
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Writer and psychologist
Location: Macedonia
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