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darigeorgieva
Member since April 17, 2022
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The past in you
If your words
can mean so much
for another woman
I am only a particle
from my own delusion...
I just want to touch you -
but I won't do it.
Thinking about you is a mistake
my heart cries
while I laugh with my friends...
I read the newest verse -
you dedicated it to another girl
but as soon as I wish
to hurt me
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why the hell,
am I still mad?
I draw with crayons
my appearance in the dark -
by order, in your style,
because for me the difference
is the biggest threat…
To be honest with myself, I'm not -
even the poems are not colorful
that text written for you...
his sequel withered.
A new character in the novella?
How can I admit
that it looks like you again?
Does it make a difference
will he be able to love me?
I won't cover up
the feelings and the wounds
I will be proud of them
because I am happy too
from the fact that they destroy me
always with a different beat...
You don't pray, you don't show
all that lies beyond
your idea of the past
and the pieces stained with blood.
Maybe I should lie
that I got over you
and that it doesn't hurt anymore
but as for my poetry
sincerity does not speak
so what's the point
all this to continue?
darigeorgieva’s timeline
- April 2023
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17 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2022
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30 FriReceived a critique
on The past in you from @Ray Whitaker
"Longish, and expresses strong sentiment. Perhaps some of your descriptions can be made even more stronger by taking time to edit descriptions into shorter phrases. Short, powerful descriptions bring forth extremely powe…" -
30 FriReceived a critique
on The past in you from @Jackweb
"Outstanding and beautifully crafted piece. The flow was a perfect one. Nice job! ." -
30 FriReceived a critique
on The past in you from @Jackweb
"Outstanding and beautifully crafted piece. The flow was a perfect one. Nice job! ." -
29 Thu
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23 FriReceived a critique
on Escape from/with love from @Ray Whitaker
"Do you use a online translator? Nice poem here, full of realism, and toughing descriptors. My only suggestion woulf be to find some stanza breaks in it. That makes it easier for your readers to “get it” -what you are at…" -
18 Sun
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14 WedReceived a critique
on Trip down memory lane (Vanishing naivety) from @Celso G. Tertins
"oh i see. i'm sorry if it came out wrong, i didn't mean anything bad at it. i am just really slow sometimes and i am not a native english speaker myself but the way you are able to write a poem and being such a young ag…" -
12 MonReceived a critique
on Traces of/on me from @Ray Whitaker
"Thank you for pointing that out. Looking forward to more of yiur work here." -
12 MonReceived a critique
on Trip down memory lane (Vanishing naivety) from @Celso G. Tertins
"just curious, is this an english translation? i'm finding it hard to grasp some parts of it, maybe i'm just being slow-witted as always. anyways, "my morning put on your other lonely song" struck a chord in me. maybe i'…" -
10 Sat
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08 ThuReceived a critique
on Traces of/on me from @Ray Whitaker
"I see that this is your first posted poem. I m always glad to see some one post their work for the first time here! Your series of poems is interesting, I like your use of punctuation in using the "*" [star] to end each…" -
06 TueFirst publication
Traces of/on me
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06 Tue
- April 2022
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17 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 142 days later.
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Just a girl who is in love with her dreams…
Location: Pleven, Bulgaria, BGR
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