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Credell Simeon
Member since January 9, 2022
Member for 4 years, 4 months
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Stress Relief Doctor's visit
No painkiller can bring relief,
No psychologist expresses belief,
Though it's in the back of my mind,
An enemy stabbing from behind,
No justice for this unfair crime,
No compensation for the time,
Lost to sleepless nights,
Fear of bright lights,
Tears at upsetting sights,
Those feelings of unrest,
I’m not at my best,
Yet being put to the test,
By this invisible threat,
Whose anguish I cannot forget,
With every return, I face regret,
Having me in disbelief,
Doc, this agony will not be brief,
Please, prescribe me some stress relief.
Credell Simeon’s timeline
- September 2023
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30 SatContest commendation
September 2023 Challenge Waiting to see the doctor
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30 SatFirst contest commendation
September 2023 Challenge Waiting to see the doctor
with the poem "Stress Relief Doctor's visit".
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26 TueReceived a critique
on Stress Relief Doctor's visit from @Lavender
"Hello, Credell, I felt the strong anxiety within this poem, and the frustration. Reminds me a bit of Billy Joel's "We Didn't Start The Fire" with its fast pace. At some point in our lives, we can all relate to this poem…" -
24 Sun
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21 Thu
- January 2023
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09 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2022
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10 MonReceived a critique
on Ghosted Me from @Geezer
"Welcome to Neo. Although I normally don't like repeated first words of a line, I feel that this will be an exception. It lends a feel of repetivness of the daily schedule,[ and maybe the reason for the breakup]. Your la…" -
09 Sun
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09 SunFirst publication
Ghosted Me (since unpublished)
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09 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
A new and budding poetry writing who is excited to share my work.
Location: SK
Recent Work
Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Stress Relief Doctor's visit | September 2023 Challenge Waiting to see the doctor | – |