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Congratulations to our weekly winner!
The Winner of
Neopoet Weekly 08/17/25 to 08/23/25 is Clentin
With the poem,Unfaithfull
Tigger Kaz
3 weeks 1 day ago
Congratulations
Congratulations on the win.
Just one thing. The second line of this set of rhyming couplets doesn't rhyme.
"The devil now lives beneath the burial plot
From the casket has earned what she had sought"
Not sure it that was intentional?
Perhaps you could amend the second line to - From the casket has earned what she forgot.
Just a suggestion.
It would tie it to the fact she forgot her vows and the values.