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coldplayfan
Member since December 13, 2020
Member for 5 years, 5 months
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last goodbye
If I could lay down and die,
I would surely try,
preserve me in pickle, until I cry.
Think about how you want to remember me,
as you lay me to the ground,
six foot under I won't make any sound.
Then, I would surely be gone,
but will you play my favorite song?.
The words "I love you".you know the one.
Think how you will of me,
loving, caring, shy,
this my love is my last goodbye.
If I could reincarnate for you.
what would I say or do?.
The haunting of your dreams to name a few.
Please though, speak of me well.
keep my secrets, they are not to tell,
i can see what you're doing, even in hell.
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- December 2025
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13 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2021
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13 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2020
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22 TueReceived a critique
on last goodbye from @Asche Keegan
"DANG!!! This blew me away and sent shivers up and down my spine!! I agree with the others that the third line seemed out of place with the rest, but that last line was spectacular." -
21 MonReceived a critique
on last goodbye from @Geezer
"with Teddy on this one, it is the attitude of someone who says; "When I'm gone you will miss me." I kind of get the 3d line. I think that it is supposed to reference the art of embalming for the funeral? Not a great tho…" -
21 Mon
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14 Mon
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13 SunReceived a critique
on mental health from @lovedly
"Firstly your first poem is too longly max lines must be12 to 19 ////else it becomes epicurial many skip ....all mostly want to be read here me too next why mind etc in CAPS doesn't add a bit next all are abused at youth…" -
13 SunFirst publication
mental health
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13 Sun
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13 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
like to write poems and quotes.
Location: durham
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bob dylan
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