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Jalopy
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...........Jalopy..........
cruising country roads
music blaring, wind blown hair
backseat full of friends
mand
15 years 2 months ago
I love this one!
First off I like the word Jalopy! it just rolls off the tongue. But I also like the image you have portrayed! it reminds me of my youth, those were the days! Full of summer fun and freindship.
Just wonderful - you have given me a whole head full of memories in just three lines.
Love Mand xxxxxxxxx
brittle light
15 years 2 months ago
Hi Mand
sorry for this late reply... sometimes I forget my manners...glad you liked this small piece...I liked writing it
thanks for stopping by