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benno_422
Member since July 22, 2016
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Summertime Sadness
I'm a blue spot on the sky
and the planes
they drag the ocean's salt
a wet mattress
onto the panoramic sand.
It would be deafening
if everyone
spoke to me together.
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but then again, how else
do clouds
start to feel
better
benno_422’s timeline
- July 2021
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22 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2017
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22 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2016
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27 WedReceived a critique
on Summertime Sadness from @weirdelf
"You'll find there are a few Aussies here. This is a very cool poem. Elegantly sparse yet evocative language. Looking forward to more of your work, please message me when you post new works, I'm unable to read every poem…" -
24 SunReceived a critique
on Summertime Sadness from @alidzain
"Welcome to the Neopoet! Its a good start and I know you'll get better as long as you continue to write and learn from the people here! Alid" -
23 SatReceived a critique
on Summertime Sadness from @Geezer
"Don't know enough about you and your work to give really good critique here. but I have a sense of what you are trying to say. I think you are saying just what you mean, when you say that you are a blue spot on the sky…" -
22 FriFirst publication
Summertime Sadness
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22 FriPosted a poem
Summertime Sadness
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22 FriJoined Neopoet
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About me
Just an Australian who likes to write.
Location: United Kingdom
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