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bengt Frisk
Member since October 15, 2016
Member for 9 years, 7 months
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intimacy
intimacy
We rose up slowly
As if
We didn´t belong to the outside world
Any more
like swimmers in the shadowy dream
we didn´t need to breethe
bengt Frisk’s timeline
- October 2021
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15 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2017
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15 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2016
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25 Tue
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24 Mon
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23 SunCritiqued
"Rhyme II" by @uglywill
"I agree with you about free verse and that a lot of feeling can be lost in the search of a perfectly structured poem.Why not mix it? Why not use the tools of poem like association saturated, dense expression and interna…" -
19 WedReceived a critique
on The meeting from @weirdelf
"If you look to the top of your page now you will see an 'Edit' tab. If you post a revised or final form of you poem there we can see the changes you have made and sometimes help you save "throwing out the baby with the…" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on The meeting from @Geezer
"and suggestion would be to reverse the order of the words,[gives and still]. Other than that, it's a thumbs up for me! ~ Gee." -
16 SunReceived a critique
on The meeting from @Esker
"I greatly like your background on the work explaining trees as obstacles which when moving through alone with someone or with a dog....(I do walks not dog punching as in hunting) either way the trees are obstacles but a…" -
16 SunCritiqued
"Evolve Resolve:" by @OriginalRhyku
"Great poem! I really like the so-called economic poems when they are at the same time so full of thoghts A small suggestion only Sense and reason's linked in any way so I can imagine a fourth row t e x Emotionellaty bin…" -
16 SunFirst critique offered
on "Evolve Resolve:" by @OriginalRhyku
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15 SatReceived a critique
on The meeting from @Esker
"a good mix! was thinking of "into" follow you to..the trees or follow U through the trees.... just a smoother abstraction word flow but it works well the way it is! this could be a spring scene summer or fall Thank U Mr…" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on The meeting from @Candlewitch
"perhaps: a simple encounter between us (for the first line) If I were to lose anything, it would be the last line. the rest is all good. that's my honest opinion. nice to meet you! always, Cat" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on The meeting from @weirdelf
"yes, that first line needs work. Some refuse to offer suggestions, fearing sullying the poet's purity of thought. I don't. Perhaps- Just between us or encountering, or that encounter between us or even so simple that My…" -
15 SatFirst publication
The meeting
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15 Sat
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15 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
a former student of law in the university of Lund Sweden After my examination and a life of work i retired and settled down in the town of Helsingborg.
Just now I enjoy trying to learn more about so called economic poem
Location: Sweden Helsingborg
Favorite Poets
Tomas Tranströmer awarded the Nobelprice 2011
to his condensed
translucent images
he gives us fresh access to reality
Recent Work
intimacy
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