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babygirl_princess

Member since August 22, 2019

Member for 6 years, 9 months

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rain

Posted Aug 26, 2019 · 11 lines · 2 critiques

I like rain, not every day is the same
I need to release this pain
not gonna play this game

thunder and lighting oh my
these thoughts are racing I wonder why
sometimes I just wanna be alone and cry
I say im ok but that is a lie

when I was 15 and started to write poems I couldn't wait for the rain
for some reason when its rains im no longer in pain
and I can write
like im a bird thats taken flight

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August 2019
27 Tue

Received a critique
on rain from @scribbler
"I have been accused of rhyming a bit myself. This poem is a good display of emotions. But I think you have tried to pack too much into the first line.Now on to the last stanza. I am myself guilty of varying line lengths…"
27 Tue

Received a critique
on rain from @Geezer
"if you like rhyme, make it work for you. There are going to be more than a few people that will tell you that rhyme is old fashioned or passe. Yet, in the fifteen years that I have been around writing, I have seen many…"
26 Mon

Received a critique
on i don't know from @lovedly
"my late poetess teacher gave me lots of dope but I couldn't cope so read my FREESTYLE if it does please it takes time to be a poet learn from the stalwarts above baby girl yes poetry wise @26 love after research it hurts"
26 Mon

Posted a poem
rain
"I like rain, not every day is the same"
Open thread 11 lines
23 Fri

Received a critique
on i don't know from @Geezer
"with me too! I would call this prose, but not to worry, it shows your heart. This is a very good piece to show that special someone. I know that it can be scary to reveal yourself, open your being to another; especially…"
22 Thu

Received a critique
on i don't know from @tyro
"As far as connecting with me as a reader I found this very good. It is so evocative I think it must be real life. maybe that's what pulled me in. At the end I thought of the famous couplet by Tennyson: I hold it true, w…"
22 Thu

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i don't know
22 Thu

Posted a poem
i don't know
"I don't know a part of me wants to be with someone"
Open thread 21 lines
22 Thu

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my name is raven villafranco i am 26 yr old from texas

Location: Texas

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Posted: 26 August, 2019

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