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Avelina
Member since June 9, 2021
Member for 4 years, 11 months
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Revelations in my Tuesday lecture
Perhaps there is no such thing as soulmates
And fate doesn't exist
Maybe we are simply people who get along
Two individuals that enjoy each others company
Perhaps life would be wasted waiting for the perfect one
Maybe you just have to pick someone and start living
Avelina’s timeline
- August 2024
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23 FriReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Leslie
"I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM" -
23 FriReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Leslie
"I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Lavender
"Hello, Avelina, Yes! "Perhaps" to all the mentioned revelations! I can't help but wonder what the topic of the Tuesday lecture was, and it doesn't really matter, but I found myself sitting there, too. Thank you! Lavender" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Obadiah Grey
"Hey, I'm with you on the revelations !! The phrase "Bobbing for apples" springs to mind, (pssst, no-one really knows what the fuck is going on!) nice start,,,,,, Obi." -
20 TueReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Candlewitch
"good work...keep on experimenting, it can only make your poetry better. It is very nice to meet you, welcome to Neopoet! *hugs, Cat" -
20 TueReceived a critique
on Revelations in my Tuesday lecture from @Leslie
"This is good sound advice! I loved it. If you don't mind leave a comment on mine." -
20 Tue
- June 2024
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06 Thu
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06 ThuReceived a critique
on It's been a long day from @Lavender
"Hello, Avelina, Strong title that gives the poem its primary focus. Because the title is so strong, I really appreciate the brevity of the poem. I think it can be even more brief, and still just as potent and raw. You h…" -
06 ThuPosted a poem
It's been a long day
"My bloodshot eyes are sore and red, they’ve been threatening to leak tears all day. But I'll blame it on the hayfever that I’ve never had because I don't want to believe, things between us have changed." - June 2022
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09 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2021
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21 Thu
- June 2021
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09 WedFirst publication
Too good to be true (since unpublished)
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09 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I love playing the piano, painting, reading literature, and writing poetry.
Location: Australia
Favorite Poets
Emily Dickinson
Emily Brontë
D.H Lawrence
Shakespeare
and Christina Rossetti.
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