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AuroraBorealis
Member since March 2, 2012
Member for 14 years, 3 months
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The Downfall
Your hands built me
And now they break me
Your words taught me
And now they taunt me
Your eyes held love
Now they've gone dark
Your arms held me
And now they push me back
Your heart loved me
And now there's nothing left
AuroraBorealis’s timeline
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- March 2012
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30 FriReceived a critique
on The Downfall from @AnnaNJ
"I really liked it. You could be talking about a lot of different subjects (i.e. friend, lover, family member..) and that's what makes it so relate-able. When I read it, I was able to think about people in my own life wh…" -
30 FriReceived a critique
on The Downfall from @Eduardo Cruz
"the turmoils of love, Yes then no. I recognize it and have felt it. a bit cliche, but good rymthm. Eddie" -
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21 WedCritiqued
"See You In Geometry, Princess" by @emogothgirl
"You just made my day, angel. Just know I'm staring out my geometry window right back at you" -
09 Fri
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06 TueCritiqued
"The Caution Tape Means It's About To Explode" by @emogothgirl
"Wonderful as always, how you manage to write amazing, and it's only homework, I'll never know. Once again,I love the ending, but I like it better how you sent it to me, with each line having a space between it, instead…" -
06 TueFirst critique offered
on "The Caution Tape Means It's About To Explode" by @emogothgirl
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05 MonReceived a critique
on My Savior from @emogothgirl
"the title confused me a little, but i got it when i read the whole thing. don't underestimate yourself love, you've got some ink in your blood. the people here will guide you, and try to help when they can, and sometime…" -
05 MonReceived a critique
on My Savior from @scribbler
"Welcome to the asylum lol. For a fellow beginner ( and we're ALL beginners until we achieve something perfect) this is a very nice explanation of saviors being all around us...........stan" -
05 MonReceived a critique
on My Savior from @Candlewitch
"I almost didn't read, because of the title. I avoid religious writes as much as I can. But I'm glad I took the time to get past it and read the content. Maybe "Champion" or "Life's Blood" or "My Passion" would make a be…" -
05 MonReceived a critique
on My Savior from @Nordic cloud
"This I loved, the idea of it very particular, and neatly clear to the reader. Loved the humour: " the hugs, the laughter, the love, and the cheese" Not quite happy with these lines: "All that's left is a myriad of movem…" -
04 SunReceived a critique
on My Savior from @Eduardo Cruz
"This is very beautiful, a tribute to your family, and Dancing on the stage which seems that you love. I like that you use these things to be your savoir. The title of the poem had at first put me off, because I do not b…" -
04 SunFirst publication
My Savior
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04 Sun
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04 SunNew follower
@Candlewitch
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02 FriJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
Hi. I'm here to try and write better. I'm a dancer and understand the beauty of expressing yourself in any form but I'm not the best at doing so through writing, so I hope to gain feedback, and improve on this site. I'm a musical theatre junkie, and being on stage is my life. I also sing, but not well. And my best friend is also the best writer I know, I hope to get help from her on this site :)
Location: Long Island, USA
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