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AshSice
Member since November 13, 2019
Member for 6 years, 7 months
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Rise
Ok let’s get this straight
Life isn’t all that great
There is hell knocking at my door
And bodies on my bedroom floor
There is chaos in our eyes
And people full of lies
But why don’t we rise
Rise above all our problems and fears
And stop crying tears
Sure, we aren’t perfect
But life is worth it
Don’t you want to grow old one day
Or celebrate your children’s birthday
I want to live my life
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Become someone’s wife
I want to see my grandchildren play
And think hey we’re okay
We’re free from the troublesome times
And all of our dreadful crimes
AshSice’s timeline
- November 2024
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13 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2020
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13 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2019
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14 ThuReceived a critique
on Rise from @Rottiestyl
"Welcome to a Neopoet, I did not have a problem with this having that no break feeling. It does read like a rap song but the rhyme and cadence made a good read for me." -
14 ThuReceived a critique
on Rise from @c lynn brooks
"fellow poet this has the beat of a rap song did you mean it to be so? about the bodies on the floor I question the why behind that as well" -
13 WedReceived a critique
on Rise from @Barbara Writes
"I loved the theme the flow and the rhyming. spaces between every four or more stanza with help with readibility" -
13 WedFirst publication
Rise
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13 WedJoined Neopoet
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15 year old girl trying to express my feelings.
Location: Queensland
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