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arsinBW
Member since May 14, 2013
Member for 13 years
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Grit & Grime
Dead soilders crunch under feet
Where stained bricks and alleys meet.
Pass along the paper bag,
Spark up a jack, take a drag.
Dime bags sold from corner stores.
Addicts, dealers, pimps and whores.
Living, dying, day by day.
No time for sleep where I stay.
Daily hustle on the flow,
Torn flyers read, "Just Say No!"
Born to this, I'll never leave.
No way out that I perceive.
arsinBW’s timeline
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One year of membership
- May 2013
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17 FriReceived a critique
on Fading Mask from @Ian.T
"The quotes at the bottom of some of us here is the signature bit you can fill in on your profile, The profile is where I start on comments of new poets just to see where they are from and some idea of the short descript…" -
16 ThuReceived a critique
on Grit & Grime from @Jaq Cee
"Wow!! Very powerful write arsin. So raw. I enjoyed this." -
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on Fading Mask from @Jaq Cee
"I like this one Arsin better than any I've seen from you on fs. :) Jaq xx" -
16 ThuNew follower
@Jaq Cee
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15 WedNew follower
@BelindaR
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15 WedReceived a critique
on Fading Mask from @loveslave
"A Suicide poem, correct? That's how I interpreted it anyway. I think it's good when poets tackle difficult, uncomfortable issues in their poems. Poetry should reflect reality, both the good aspects of it and the really…" -
15 WedReceived a critique
on Fading Mask from @Ian.T
"Have long asked for a bit where you can say fact or fiction, but to me in this case, I shall wash the ceiling with your next piece. A good write and a good imagination, Yours Ian.T PS:- Let us have a bit more profile wh…" -
15 WedReceived a critique
on Fading Mask from @BelindaR
"I thought the flow had a nice clip - clip to it. The poem definitely made sense throughout. I can see the clown acting out without any emotion - dead man's stare. Dark - but good." -
15 WedFirst publication
Fading Mask
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Interests - reading, writing, film, skateboarding, anything without four walls
Location: USA - Virginia
Favorite Poets
Keats
Poe
Martin
Herbert
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