arjiris.f.

Member since September 14, 2021

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Kaleidoscope

Posted Jan 15, 2022 · 16 lines · 1 critiques

I write poems
so as to give life to the words.

With a beautiful red silk
ribbon,
I tie a bow
on each one’s neck.

As I’m holding them into my fist,
they seem like spring butterflies.
They start to fly,
wandering happily into my room.

Every time, I see a swarm of them above my page,
I am so grateful.

Grateful to see them hovering around,
telling me how different this world would be,

if only it was made of
butterflies and flowers.

arjiris.f.’s timeline

September 2022
14 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2022
16 Sun

Received a critique
on Kaleidoscope from @Race_9togo
"As someone who was famous on this site, but it now no longer with us, said to me when I was learning how to write decent poetry (still learning!), "Your poem is too prosaic, too wordy." So here are some suggestions. "I…"
15 Sat

Posted a poem
Kaleidoscope
"I write poems"
Open thread 16 lines
06 Thu

Received a critique
on Midnight song from @Jackweb
"Mostly, creative writers embraces midnight as a preferred atmosphere for creating their thoughts on paper. But here it seems you lost the idea or the subject You intend to write. (E.g) ...the moon shines away!"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on Midnight song from @scribbler
"an expanded Haiku then?"
03 Mon

Received a critique
on Midnight song from @scribbler
"I'm a bit unsure what to think about this but figured I'd let you know I dropped by......stan"
03 Mon

Posted a poem
Midnight song
"pause of time:"
Open thread 8 lines
02 Sun

Received a critique
on ticking clocks from @scribbler
"I keep wanting to read about a pause before the clock resumes. Don't know Why but you might play around with working in a pause and see if you like it better."
02 Sun

Received a critique
on ticking clocks from @Geezer
"on the tercet! It gives the whole meaning to the poem! ~ Geezer. ."
01 Sat

Received a critique
on ticking clocks from @Jackweb
"A poetic unit of three lines can get your eyes glued, mind and thought to read aloud and try to unveil the entire body of a poem. Tercet or triplet is fancy, apt and very understandable."
December 2021
31 Fri

Received a critique
on ticking clocks from @Triskelion
"to you and everyone else as well!"
31 Fri

Posted a poem
ticking clocks
"New Year’s Eve:"
Open thread 3 lines
30 Thu

Posted a poem
dreams of fog
"the white colour hangs"
Open thread 24 lines
20 Mon

Posted a poem
cosmic love
"entwined colours"
Open thread 6 lines
15 Wed

Highest posting month
December 2021 — 5 poems
08 Wed

Posted a poem
Molly
"Molly"
Open thread 23 lines
01 Wed

Posted a poem
December’s Haiku
"Sun rays freeze as snow,"
Open thread 3 lines
October 2021
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Morning Walk
"After the storm, the field is not the same."
Open thread 8 lines
09 Sat

Posted a poem
On Halloween
"Scarecrows and bowls,"
Open thread 16 lines
06 Wed

Posted a poem
I AM - experimental poetry series (II)
"PART TWO"
Open thread 26 lines
September 2021
28 Tue

Posted a poem
your onions are making me cry
"The minced beef reminds me of how I want to smash your head."
Open thread 29 lines
25 Sat

Posted a poem
I AM - experimental poetry series (I)
"(PART ONE)"
Open thread 31 lines
14 Tue

First publication
Of water (I)
14 Tue

Most-discussed work
Of water (I)

10 critiques to date.
14 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Hey everybody! My name is Arjiris and I come from Greece. I hold a MA in Creative Writing and I love writing and reading. For me, poetry isn't just another writing genre, but it's a whole creative process that helps me find a new piece of myself and express the feelings I can't tell to other people. I write about everything, whatever inspires me every time. I draw inspiration both from my favourite poets, such as Sylvia Plath, Ann Sexton and e.e. Cummings, as well as from my favourite musicians. I'm also interested in artistic forms of poetry, such as blackout and erasure poetry, and digital collage.

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Kaleidoscope

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One year of membership

on Kaleidoscope from @Race_9togo

Kaleidoscope

on Midnight song from @Jackweb

on Midnight song from @scribbler

on Midnight song from @scribbler

Midnight song

on ticking clocks from @scribbler

on ticking clocks from @Geezer

on ticking clocks from @Jackweb

on ticking clocks from @Triskelion

ticking clocks

dreams of fog

cosmic love

December 2021 — 5 poems

Molly

December’s Haiku

Morning Walk

On Halloween

I AM - experimental poetry series (II)

your onions are making me cry

I AM - experimental poetry series (I)

Of water (I)

Of water (I)

Membership begins

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your onions are making me cry

I AM - experimental poetry series (I)

when the trees will disappear

Of water (I)

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