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Allseasonsverse
Member since April 19, 2019
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Dying Star
The day is fading fast.
The tired skies rub its heavy eyes.
The solar blast will rest at last, in view of twilights hue.
Seeking a falling star in the cosmos far.
I do not wish upon its fate, what destiny will it create?
Dark silhouettes and other luminous matter the nebula has scattered.
Just a piece of the distant world circling from now till time is done.
Are we alone, do others struggle to atone?
I have many places I could be, yet, I gaze within the wonder of the open sky.
In deep galaxies, afar, the supernova is held in the heart of a dying star.
Allseasonsverse’s timeline
- April 2024
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19 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2020
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19 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2019
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27 SatFirst critique offered
on "Grading On The Curve" by @gregwa8
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27 SatReceived a critique
on Dying Star from @gregwa8
"skies rubbing their heavy eyes is a great image. and a good intro to a poem, where you're waking up to a new revelation. this is a great tribute to all the sky has to offer our imagination. I like the internal rhymes. t…" -
27 Sat
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23 TueReceived a critique
on Hearts that See from @Eumolpus
"works ok to to the last line Love is many things but look to its flame, for peace lays in hearts that can see. all lines count, but the last line in a poem is tantamount. This last line does not fit any of the meter or…" -
19 FriFirst publication
Hearts that See
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19 Fri
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19 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am married, my husband and I have been together 40 years. We have five sons and one daughter all grown with children of their own. 13 grandchildren, and expecting another Grandson in a few months. I love poetry, it is part of my everyday life. I was in nursing for twenty-five years. I love nature and country living, so I hope I can share my dreams and hopes with others in my work. I look forward of being part of the poetry community here at Neopoet.
Location: NORTHEAST-USA
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