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adri3122
Member since August 30, 2022
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"Love"
We know love to be
I know love to be
What is the be?
Affection? Physical touch?
Its never been this easy, to understood what love could be
To feel the underlying
state of emotion
To be.. you. To not have to worry what other people think of you, because
Because you are you.
The world has taught us to be a version of the stimulation, to
Fit in
To heal from this feeling
The feeling of not being enough
Is not what we thought it could be
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Its being aware of your body, aware of your state in the earth in this very moment.
And maybe, just maybe
Love will find it way
Love will find its way to be
To be your escape from the true reasons you hide behind the sheep.
adri3122’s timeline
- August 2023
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30 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2022
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03 Sat
- August 2022
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31 WedReceived a critique
on "Love" from @RoseBlack
"To Neopoet, Adri. Your poem was intriguing as it seems to have started off as a romantic poem and then turned into something different. Well done. ." -
31 WedReceived a critique
on "Love" from @Obadiah Grey
"Hello there, Adri. I found your piece to be. pointed, edgy, when read in an urgent manner. I liked it a lot...... (write with the head, not the heart) Obi." -
31 WedReceived a critique
on "Love" from @Obadiah Grey
"Love could be...... Feathered, daft, leaning sweet, compliant reliant We - complete. I guess most folks interpretation of love eventually converge somewhere in the middle! and then there's those like me thats asking "wh…" -
31 WedReceived a critique
on "Love" from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Great writing. I’m not really the resident free verse expert but I like this. If you’re seeking community and interaction with other writers, I think this is a great place. I find the members to be supportive and also i…" -
30 TueFirst publication
"Love"
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30 Tue
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30 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a beginner poet seeking to find community who is familiar with writing so I can learn and expand my writing skills when it comes to poetry structure. My reasoning for joining this club is because I know that writing helps resolve inner conflicts, and I would love to educate myself on poetry and be surrounded my fellow poets to create inspiration for myself.
Location: Canada, ON
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