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Aaaronc
Member since September 6, 2017
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Worlds apart
Im sinking in quicksand
I cant seem to find my footing
My hands are shaking
My bodies moving in ways
I could not have imagined
The sunshine rays
Just dont exist in my world
Shadows fill the void
I have lost all control
The worlds got me spinning
Cant figure out the direction
So lost so confused
Cant figure out what to do
Cant find anyhelp
This is reality
This isnt a game
Its just me
Its how i am
Aaaronc’s timeline
- September 2022
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06 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2018
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06 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2017
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11 MonReceived a critique
on Worlds apart from @weirdelf
"correct grammar is necessary, in many ways poetry is a precise science, every single letter and word counts. Please don't ever use text shortcuts like 'u' for 'you' etc unless you are parodying SMS communications." -
08 FriReceived a critique
on Worlds apart from @Marvel Godwyn
"A nice poem Aaaronc, but I think you need to use the apostrophe sign. Thanks for sharing." -
08 FriReceived a critique
on Worlds apart from @weirdelf
"welcome to being a poet. Just remember it is the opposite of quicksand- in quicksand the more you struggle the quicker you sink. As a poet the more you struggle the more you rise. You have a learning curve ahead of you…" -
08 Fri
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07 Thu
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06 WedFirst publication
Life
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06 Wed
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06 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Just trying to write
Location: Canada
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