Zoe_m

Member since October 24, 2018

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Beauty

Posted Oct 24, 2018 · 9 lines · 8 critiques

They tell me i'm beautiful
Thats how how i'm recognised by the society
Nobody seems to know me, rather than my beauty
I'm confused with beauty but thats not me
I'm a woman , i'm strong and i have good inside traits
Call me by my name
Call me the woman, not beauty
Beauty fades but i dont
Dont mistake me with beauty

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Received a critique
on Beauty from @Geezer
"would be the one to say it... "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder". That is truth. Yes, the beauty of youth fades, but as you say; you do not. That in itself is a beauty, an inner beauty. I've always said that I can f…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Beauty from @raj
"a good way to express your inner voice through this poem....welcome to Neopoet ...good to know you have an open mind to learning and you have come to the right place....while others critique and comment you too would be…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Beauty from @zebra
"Beauty is a test as is ugliness each causing entrancement. Better to be beautiful :) A nice write. I agree with IRiz. I would add look not only to sentiment but to the seduction and power of language. Think metaphor. Is…"
24 Wed

Received a critique
on Beauty from @IRiz
"Hello there!!!! Welcome to Neopoet! I like your poem. The only suggestion is perhaps to think how to rephrase "good inside traits" These words do not fit with the rest of the language. Maybe you want to be more specific…"
24 Wed

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I enjoy my own space and midnight are my favourite hours , where productivity comes like a flowing water in the stream.

Location: Eastern Cape ,South Africa.

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Ntozakhe Shange- For the coloured girls who commited suicide when the

rainbow was enuf.

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