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Schisms
No wonder we've wandered
beyond safety's bounds
hands bound.
Focus thrown
a stone's throw
into the throes.
Obsession and repetition
consumed our petitions for a session with clarity.
Stuck in rhythms
bouncing musically
to the dissonance of schisms.
No wonder our peace
wandered into pieces;
We journeyed through doors
with no adjournments.
Outstretched our elasticity: alas,
demons wrenched lucidity from our grasp.
They rasped,
"No wonder you've wandered
beyond safety's bounds,
hands bound."
"Willful ignorance, in a sense,
abandons innocence,
and gives us grounds."
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