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Nov 26, 2025
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JIZZ-LANE WACKSWELL
She's already done and she knows
her cell is a hospice for ho's
and soon she'll be freed
to her viperous creed
with no need for her then, I suppose
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I enjoy word play that sounds similar, but hints strongly at the actual intention...
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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