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wkamen
Member since November 17, 2016
Member for 9 years, 6 months
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Timeless Love
Waiting, longing for love, slowed time.
Quietly sitting dormant like a volcano,
the slow pace of time tormented my soul.
I failed to see the signs appearing before my eyes.
The passage of time, darkened my sorrow,
like the night sky bringing sadness to a few.
Day after day my soul bides time.
For all things to pass.
Time did not rest, finding love was quickly fading.
The cycle of time awakened my soul,
to a clear knowledge of a time past.
Bonding time and love eternally.
wkamen’s timeline
- June 2022
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20 MonReceived a critique
on Timeless Love from @Jackweb
"The only thing that can make your poetry powerful and enticing is great imagery. I can confirm to you, it's obvious in this poem. And that's a good one. Keep searching for a true love. Tough time never last but tough pe…" -
20 MonReceived a critique
on Timeless Love from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Nice delivery. The wording has a certain amount ambiguity; are you asserting these statements or asking questions of yourself both conscious and unconscious. I suspect it’s both and that’s probably what I love about it…" -
20 MonReceived a critique
on Timeless Love from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet, if you have any questions about the website please just ask and I will answer, to the best of my knowledge. if I cannot help, we will find someone who can. about your poem, I like these lines: Time d…" -
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- November 2021
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17 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2021
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Visions of Love from @Jackweb
"A classic poem in the making. A stimulated love that intoxicates...This poet would want a repetition of her encounter with this elegant woman although there was a timeout in the scene. The devices employed very sturdy a…" -
06 MonReceived a critique
on The Language Of Drunk (Acrostic Poem) from @Geezer
"an imaginative acrostic, I see that you struggled with some of the associations and especially one of the words! Sorry, but Enrunk does not meet the criteria for a word in English. How about [Elated to find no wind]? [F…" -
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- August 2021
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- July 2021
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21 WedReceived a critique
on Unconditional Love from @Obadiah Grey
"I dunno? Every time I read you I see a guy with an acoustic guitar in hand and spliff in mouth, Its predominantly a song! yes? I like it btw. obi." -
21 WedReceived a critique
on Unconditional Love from @Geezer
"flow unconditionally. I've hesitated long enough. I wished to ponder your poem before I made a comment. Now, I think that I should let you know that this is a great poem about coming of age and understanding at last, wh…" -
14 WedReceived a critique
on Loving Touch from @Geezer
"I would have used the past tense for the third line of the last five. Either that, or edit the first line to say: "Your swayin' arms [have] let me in" Just a niggle but I think it makes it smoother. ~ Geezer. ." - March 2021
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- September 2020
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- July 2020
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- January 2018
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- November 2017
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17 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
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- October 2017
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- December 2016
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21 WedCritiqued
"Killing God" by @weirdelf
"Very poorly written. You should take a course in writing poetry before you post again. May the force be with you and your Aborigine's" -
21 WedFirst critique offered
on "Killing God" by @weirdelf
- November 2016
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17 ThuFirst publication
Somewhere (since unpublished)
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17 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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