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WinterSavannah
Member since October 16, 2020
Member for 5 years, 7 months
Cold, Orange, Leaves
Slippery, cold, pure, drops of oxygen,
slide down the side of my overly-heated face.
Sizzle. Sizzle.
The sound, the drop of dew, sizzle, sizzle,
as it slides down my oxygen-sucking face.
crackle! snap! pop!
Crackle, crackle, pop.
My black Nike's white "N" logo reflects,
bright, white, light
Ahead, at last, I spot the misty meadow up ahead.
I sprint towards the finish line!
Faster, faster, faster!
Time, non-existent.
Planet, unknown.
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Suddenly, I am struck!
Struck like lightening I tell you!
Struck, hit, bamboozled, caught off guard!
A small, furry, brown, fast outline,
of what appears to be a forest creature,
falls out of the maple tree,
knocking me into electricity.
Literally, electricity!
Body, sweat.
Internal organs, cooking.
The creature reveals itself.
A brown cub!
But where...
is mama bear?
Is she looking?
I have no time to think.
I was struck! STRUCK I tell ya!
Now, I see brilliant-yellow stars dangling from the sky
The sky? Is black. No. Blue.
Ahhhh! Can not decide.
Can.
Not.
Decide.
I awaken, next to a gorgeous man.
Drop. Dead. Gorgeous.
Heaven?
Angels?
Electricity, states a voice from above.
Voltage, shock, intensity.
But how?
Where is the cub?
I scream.
I scream!
What cub? Pronounces a voice.
Miss, miss sweet orange Georgia peach!
The angel man announces.
You slipped on the leaves!
The leaves I tell ya!
Snap!
back into reality,
i was.
Next, POW!
ZAP!
SIZZLE!
Lightning,
fried like fish,
like a Caribbean fish, in a dish!
Don't you worry,
although your vision is blurry,
you're perfectly fine.
Fine.
Like a rhyme.
Like a sign.
Like a line?
Please, please,
please,
be MINE?!?
My my my,
will you be my valentine?
was the only thing on my mind.
Only if,
and if only,
if only,
the cold, orange, wet leaves,
stay on the trees
if only if only,
the buzz still comes from the bees,
because honey always makes you sneeze,
if only, if only,
the war is done.
done.
done.
done.
only if you say i do,
do i look like the only one,
for you?
Do I?
I DO!
I DO!
I DO!
in the cold, orange leaves.
Boom!
Soggy, wet, brown,
diapers.
Warm, white, wet,
milk.
Late nights, staying up
have no energy,
in my cup.
Life changes,
rearranges.
Stages.
Ages.
Toddler chases.
To be continued.
WinterSavannah’s timeline
- October 2025
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5 years of membership
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16 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2020
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17 SatReceived a critique
on Cold, Orange, Leaves from @c lynn brooks
"I've not read the other reviews as yet however my word you sure can write the intensity in your poem is astounding and the mystery and in intrigue beautiful write and a very wan Neo poet welcome to you I hope to read mo…" -
17 SatReceived a critique
on Cold, Orange, Leaves from @Geezer
"that I get from this work, is of surprise! Surprised? I think not. I see this as a chronological poem. One that follows a set of circumstance to a conclusion. I've read it all, though it was rather longish and I feel th…" -
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About Me
Hi! I have been a poet as long as I can remember! I am now getting back into making time for my passion. Good luck y'all!
Location: Michigan/USA
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