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Wind in the Keyhole

Member since April 24, 2019

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In Freefall

Posted Oct 24, 2020 · 19 lines · 1 critiques

I think, for once, I should no more delay
Any attempt of my mind to stray
Into the forever fog that over there
Diffuses the sunlight into your hair

For...
Without your comforting shadow why
Would I entertain the thought that I
Or we or us or bosom buddies all
Should stand together or together fall
(In light)

I think, for twice, (if repetition helps)
To gather dust upon some distant shelf
In a cherishing corner of your mind
To seek clarity of the purest kind

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Else...
My thoughts, like a train at a station, embark
To some destination in forever dark
Where, without eyes, the only thing I'd see
Would be forever only you and me ,

Wind in the Keyhole’s timeline

April 2024
24 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
November 2020
29 Sun

Received a critique
on In Freefall from @Dandini
"Sorry, I didn't really understand this."
October 2020
24 Sat

Posted a poem
In Freefall
"I think, for once, I should no more delay"
Open thread 19 lines
April 2020
24 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2019
29 Mon

Received a critique
on Tiger-like from @scribbler
"I like the idea of that person who so affects our lives that their presence seems to follow us even when they're far away.....stan"
27 Sat

Critiqued
"Eyes With No Girl (with audio)" by @weirdelf
"You're welcome! The feedback I've already gotten on my first submitted poem has me really turning introspective, wondering for the first time if my subconscious mind/muse/id/whatever might be telling me things about mys…"
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Tiger-like
"I haven't seen you lately"
Open thread 20 lines
26 Fri

Critiqued
"Eyes With No Girl (with audio)" by @weirdelf
"Your poem makes me want to cast aside restraint and join in some pagan revelry on a summer solstice eve! The eyes with no girl One of many lines that are thought provoking! But that's the beauty of poetry. Love the flow…"
26 Fri

Critiqued
"Catching The Mood of The Rain" by @Rula
"As a newcomer this is probably a belated comment, but I love the theme of rain and mood, since they go together so well. My mood has seldom if ever not been affected by the rain, as well as by the wind. But enough about…"
26 Fri

Critiqued
"Sensuality " by @gregwa8
"I love the simplicity/complexity of the emotions triggered by such lines as The scent of Library books To me there is a longing and a contentment conveyed in your poem that cause me to not just enjoy it but experience i…"
26 Fri

First critique offered
on "Sensuality " by @gregwa8
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Islands from @Geezer
"I liked the rhythm of it and although some of the lines didn't make sense, they did! I understood the sadness of her not taking the time to be interested in what you are doing. I think that the resentment is just that s…"
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Islands from @Eumolpus
"I think the devise of repeating the words works very well (knot and root) and would continue that through-out. Otherwise, not knowing anything but the poem, the effect I get is not in keeping with your note about it. No…"
25 Thu

First publication
Islands
25 Thu

Posted a poem
Islands
"She cannot unknot the knots"
Open thread 20 lines
24 Wed

Joined Neopoet
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About Me

About me

I know who I am, what I am, and where I am going to. Life may be a journey, but it's a journey with a destination. And a destiny.

Location: USA

Favorite Poets

e. e. cummings

Robert Frost

Emily Dickinson

Recent Work

In Freefall

Posted: 24 October, 2020

Tiger-like

Posted: 26 April, 2019

Islands

Posted: 25 April, 2019

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