Valyrianne

Member since August 30, 2012

Member for 13 years, 9 months

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5 Poems

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for his howling heart...

Posted Nov 26, 2013 · 20 lines · 6 critiques

angular
defined by the crooks
of letters
turned so that
their faces twist
into sheer delight

blazing
as open windows
in a burning house
so hot that the frame
morphs
into his haunted face

strong
if only for fleeting glimpses

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into the future
that never came
and the passion

the passion
that has always
been

Valyrianne’s timeline

August 2022
30 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
August 2017
30 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2016
14 Wed

Received a critique
on Reaper from @Esker
"The Hunger still love this poem years later... watching the moon now that summer is gone... winter will arrive in her duster of crystalline splendor the Ice Queen united with her darkness just one of my fave poems U wro…"
August 2016
05 Fri

Received a critique
on for his howling heart... from @Esker
"supp...excellent poem... bored out of my gourd today dug into the old timey stuff re posting this... middle of work here... our gardens beautiful love summer... the heat... all the proper girls in cotton dresses girly w…"
September 2015
13 Sun

Received a critique
on for his howling heart... from @Esker
"au loup"
13 Sun

Received a critique
on for his howling heart... from @Esker
"mid way through sept..... your poetry then I felt... recall reading... a loop... thank U"
April 2015
06 Mon

Received a critique
on epitaph from @Esker
"far on the forest trail with the shar pei haunting the woods...the slender trunks the limbs and conifers gathered in their hollows..Her nose to the winds... Something in there...we push on gliding like shadows...sunset…"
December 2014
05 Fri

Received a critique
on Wile Away from @Esker
"still enjoy this read...... thank youy\!"
August 2014
08 Fri

Received a critique
on Reaper from @Esker
"i read books over and over..find new ones....the facets of the much... I greatly like the way you write.... the structure pattern of thought association in the way this is carefully set up is fantasticaly creative... no…"
November 2013
29 Fri

Received a critique
on for his howling heart... from @Esker
"smitten smelters winter curls flat its vivid sharpness sinking into the exposed the early darkness here..there.. a magnificent poem a true passion thank you poet . . ."
26 Tue

Critiqued
"thigh socks" by @ephraimcrud
"well...sorry I am just trying to compose myself lol! I very much enjoyed how you broke the last few words. It actually drew me down with it and gave a very satisfying conclusion to the buildup of the rest of the piece…"
26 Tue

Critiqued
"lipstick (audio)" by @ephraimcrud
"I was so enthrolled that I forgot to comment on this right away because I had to read more! I do thoroughly enjoy this tit for tat, teasing style of seduction. Im sure you can expect a lot more of me around these parts!…"
26 Tue

Posted a poem
for his howling heart...
"angular"
Open thread 20 lines
August 2013
30 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2012
23 Tue

Posted a poem
epitaph
"she clears her throat"
Open thread 15 lines
September 2012
04 Tue

Critiqued
"Memorandum of an Artiste" by @Proprietress of Crimson Hearts
"my heart has fallen so completely for you that every word reached out its hand and touched the very edge of my sensitivities with velvet whispers of who I want to be…truly a work of Art my dear…simply lovely… Yours, Val"
04 Tue

Posted a poem
Wile Away
"I'll wonder awhile"
Open thread 28 lines
04 Tue

Critiqued
"* H.....e.....i.....s.....h *" by @Esker
"humbled, impressed and intrigued...but then you knew as much...almost has a feel of game on... Thank you so much, Val"
04 Tue

New follower
@Esker
03 Mon

New follower
@Dalton
03 Mon

Critiqued
"Eve Redhanded" by @Dalton
"Nicely executed! Val"
03 Mon

Critiqued
"Eve Redhanded" by @Dalton
"Honestly this made me giggle a little, and think a little longer. Perhaps that was your purpose, perhaps I am a strange one...either way. Bravo! Val"
03 Mon

Critiqued
"Pomme" by @Esker
"booming exchange in darkest night where she remembers in darkest forests you were once villain and now her hero speaking of forbidden she winks, shy smiles devilish eyes you raise your head and purr... May seems strange…"
02 Sun

Posted a poem
Eighteen Again
"No words can ensnare the soft waves"
Open thread 12 lines
02 Sun

Critiqued
"r e t i c u l a r .. s w i v e l .. s v e l t e .. g u i d e " by @Esker
"This feels like a performance piece. Like I can see the pale swirls of smoke rising from the soft and hurried brushes of the snare as William Shatner sips his scotch between chopped lines and long drags from his Joe Cam…"
02 Sun

First critique offered
on "r e t i c u l a r .. s w i v e l .. s v e l t e .. g u i d e " by @Esker
August 2012
30 Thu

First publication
Reaper
30 Thu

Posted a poem
Reaper
"don’t touch me"
Open thread 13 lines
30 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.