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valene
Member since June 20, 2016
Member for 9 years, 11 months
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THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER
my love's not one
to lay back and listen to music.
that's why we fuck all day.
that's why i love music.
man, what the fuck?
200,000 years
and i'm still none the wiser
cos nothing changes. governments
world-wide, year-in year-out, pledge
prosperity and promised lands.
yet, after 6000 years of 'civilisation'
(whatever that means), here we are
still stuck in the bog of eternal stench
and i'm fucked as to how to stop its rot,
since history tells me that revolutions
don't work. they merely replace one
power crazed idiot with another
reason i love music.
valene’s timeline
- June 2021
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20 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2018
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER from @Sparrow
"Or should we say assassins of people, does it matter a hell who writes what, just get on and judge the poem or write, without downing the writer as we most times have never met, and live on the far reaches of a troubled…" -
04 FriReceived a critique
on THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER from @chevyvent
"take it from me Jess needs help. He puts others down so he can feel superior over them, Jess is for himself don't be fooled by his kindness there's a lot of rottenness in his soul. He never helped me but always put me d…" -
04 FriReceived a critique
on THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER from @weirdelf
"He is under the delusion that he is anything but mediocre." -
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03 ThuReceived a critique
on THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER from @IRiz
"Hello mean poet, Your poem reads well and gives the impression of a lost soul and unrest. I can relate to the topic and love music as well, although for a different reason. I love music because it helps to share what is…" -
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02 WedReceived a critique
on THE MUSIC'S NOT OVER from @chevyvent
"Poetry can have a tendency to be abstract by intention especially considering it is written as an expression of self so naturally only the author will have a full understanding hi poet friend your verses bang in the hea…" -
02 WedCritiqued
"The Measured Steps Of The Entropy Tango" by @weirdelf
"no, you're not confident enough to be cocky. xx" -
02 WedCritiqued
"The Measured Steps Of The Entropy Tango" by @weirdelf
"so what you saying question mark. i'm intrigued. x" -
02 WedCritiqued
"The Measured Steps Of The Entropy Tango" by @weirdelf
"come out, come out, wherever you are exclamation mark. oh, there should be an exclamation mark after both come out's but i couldn't be arsed to write exclamation mark twice more, so i didn't put exclamation mark after t…" -
02 WedCritiqued
"The Measured Steps Of The Entropy Tango" by @weirdelf
"...assuming you get what a difference a day makes to twenty four hours from tulsa. big kissy x" -
02 WedCritiqued
"The Measured Steps Of The Entropy Tango" by @weirdelf
"Revel in the chaos Dance to the divine complexity of the universe Tiptoe on the edge Of all there is of space" -
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02 WedReceived a critique
on thought for the day from @gregwa8
"I like the off-rhyme of "offer" and "nowhere." it's an inspiring poem. thanks!" - April 2018
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29 SunCritiqued
"Fishbowl Memories" by @mark
"...are very good friends. need one say more question mark. eph x" -
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20 TueAnniversary
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04 TueNew follower
@Rhiannon1010
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- October 2016
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- September 2016
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30 FriNew follower
@lovedly
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15 ThuFirst critique offered
on "conservative" (since unpublished) by @gemma stoner
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14 WedFirst publication
Honky Tonk Queen
- June 2016
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22 WedNew follower
@riotface97
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20 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 86 days later.
About Me
About me
Snippet of Me
Not a prude
Never lewd
Rarely rude
Sometimes crude
Like “Hey Jude”
Love me dude
And
Tanning nude!
Location: past, present & maybe future
Recent Work
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The Pretend You - Part Two
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The Pretend You - Part one
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