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utchy
Member since October 11, 2017
Member for 8 years, 7 months
TO LIVE AGAIN (12-01-2012)
Existing…..
In this grisly grotto of endless void
Shivering amidst turbulent thoughts..
…cold…..so cold….
Sightless…heedless…devoid of emotions
Mindful of the encroaching darkness
That would birth an expected despair
Howling wind in mindless rage
Screaming as in laborious pain
Mirroring my emotions…my aches…my dejection
In the twilight…I seek the hidden light
Like a drunken wanderer…clueless
…tossed about in the tempestuous storm
Knowing the timeless light lurks around the corner
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like the maiden’s nut…..waiting…just waiting
to be uncovered…hatched…liberated
In my pitiful existence
clarity becomes me…
As I search…seek…fearful…to say the least
That in the expected discovery…illumination
…hides an even deeper darkness
I shiver still
…uncontrollably
Like undulating leaves…on a windy night
…the flapping wings of an eagle reborn
I seek to gain insight…into this turbulent existence
I search for purpose…..for reason
Asking…not for the thousandth time…..
To stop existing…and start living.
utchy’s timeline
- October 2022
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11 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2018
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11 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2017
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14 SatReceived a critique
on TO LIVE AGAIN (12-01-2012) from @Geezer
"to be a swirl of emotion, even though there is supposedly a decided lack of it in your character. I was going to nit-pick and tell you all the things that I felt were wrong about this work, and then I found that... ther…" -
14 Sat
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12 Thu
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11 Wed
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11 Wed
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11 WedFirst publication
FEELINGS (since unpublished)
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11 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I enjoy Poetry and have been scribbling my rambling thoughts on paper for over 30years since i was a little girl. I have received favorable reviews over the years but has never been published because i always felt my thoughts were private. I'm only now collating my writings with the intention of finally 'sharing' and seeing my work in print. Would appreciate your contributions and criticisms. I hope i am in the right place.
Location: Nigeria, Lagos
Every great person who ever scribbled beautiful words on paper. Takes talent
wisdom and boldness. Thanks
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