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aviisevil
Member since November 6, 2014
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Priest of the pyre
Castle black; of ashes
Burning on a swamp of fire
withholding self-
And 'em stones and saphire
One fall a thousand feet
Lies in ruin a temple and shire
A Priest rests in grave
Breathing smoke from the pyre
His eyes closed-
Wearing a face of gold
In his wake lies the tomb
Of years young and old
With a tear he awakes
To witness a weather so cold
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Wither and then he aches
With the dread one beholds.
In shadow he awaits
For the need of a blue sky
Morrow might not breed
But the yesterday never dies
He grieves of the martyred
And enemies who pry
The key is painted beyond
And the door is kept nigh
Dark walks through the surface
Falling on this ragged terrain
Wearing a cape of silver
In moon-light it glitters again
As holy clouds eat the stars
Scars tear open for a rain
Written in stone; a tale
That no one but one can claim
Hanging by a cliffs name
A potrait clings to a thread
Gave birth to the wind
When the river took a breath
Now the ancient lies cold
And the mourner dead
Distance that divided
Consumed the steps those led
Castle black; of ashes
Burning on a swamp of fire
withholding self-
And 'em clocks and saphire
Whence the priest is dead
Avenged by the sire
Embers would breathe again
From the tears of the pyre
To forever walk in a circle
Of a fool and a liar
All that is must be gone
And be born again-
From the depth of the pyre
aviisevil’s timeline
- November 2024
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06 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2019
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06 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2019
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28 Mon
- September 2016
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13 TueReceived a critique
on The barren sky from @Sparrow
"Have tried to read this one but it needs room to breathe, Try to break up the lines into Stanzas of four or five lines each. Try to sort out the flow and as the write and use of words is very good this will make a grand…" - November 2015
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06 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2015
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21 SatReceived a critique
on Priest of the pyre from @wesley snow
"First a very belated welcome to NeoPoet. I hope you stay a while and take advantage of everything the site has to offer. As to the poem, I won't say I understood everything. Some of it muddled in my mind. That's me. Whe…" -
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- December 2014
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29 Mon
- November 2014
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30 Sun
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15 SatHighest posting month
November 2014 — 7 poems
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06 ThuFirst critique offered
on "PAY ATTENTION" by @Starlight
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06 ThuFirst publication
The whispers of the end
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06 Thu
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06 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
My name is avi Sharma and I hail from India, I am currently pursuing engineering in computer science. I love writing, not just poems. I like to think of myself as a poet and somewhat a philosopher too, though, i have much to learn. I began writing at a young age to let my emotions out and it is still the major factor of my output. I'm very awkward as a person but very confident as a poet and that's why i created a type of alternate ego for me 'aviisevil' for it lets my words flow more freely. I usually write dark writes and try to make them open to interpretation. I hope to grow as a poet and someday publish my own work.
Location: india, jammu, j&k, IND
Recent Work
Priest of the pyre
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The barren sky
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An eye for a heart
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The whispers of the end
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