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PianoBoy
Member since December 21, 2011
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Her
Her eyes sparkle in the moonlight.
Her hair flows like a crystal stream.
And every time I see her face
Her smile radiates joy as it beams.
Her personality is unwavering.
Her friendship knows no ends.
Sometimes when we have a fight
she tries really hard to make amends.
Ever since I met her
my life has changed a lot.
Her kindness shows a kind of person,
the kindness I had always sought.
She's the one true friend I have.
Perhaps the only one at all.
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Sometimes when I'm alone
I'll sing to the wind a call.
A call for her smile.
A call for her long, brown hair.
A call for her kindness.
That replaces what made our Earth bare.
For when Mother sees her radiant eyes.
Her smile broadly drawn.
She breathes a great large sigh.
And then starts a new dawn.
Her happiness begins a new day.
Her presence everyone loves.
It's just that sometimes I feel alone.
My happiness Sorrow shoves.
But when she shows her kindly face.
Everything seems so great.
Every time I see her eyes,
she looks like a radiant oblate.
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21 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
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21 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2012
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29 SunReceived a critique
on Exaggeration from @Ian.T
"That you have received a good comment from Jess is good indeed and we are taken by your use of words and flow. The next step is to polish your work by joining in a workshop or two but take it step at a time, as I think…" -
28 Sat
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28 SatReceived a critique
on Exaggeration from @weirdelf
"just a few hints Leaves deteriorating underneath my feet. slows the pace down too quickly Leaves are crushed beneath my feet. Actually that all. That last line is brave and I salute you." -
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- December 2011
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21 WedFirst publication
Christmas Time
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21 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 ThuHighest posting month
December 2011 — 5 poems
About Me
Location: Florida
Favorite Poets
Edgar Allen Poe
Alfred Noyes
T.S Eliot
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