non sequitur

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SLIGHT

Posted Oct 20, 2013 · 10 lines · 1 critiques

If pain is commensurate with pleaure,
Why do I cry?
If heartache is what I treasure,
Why exacerbate the tries?

If losing is worth
The choosing
Let me not measure
Why I'd be tar- brushed by the feather
That is you!

Pp. 19/10/13

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October 2013
20 Sun

Received a critique
on SLIGHT from @Pugilist
"I understand this is not a structured piece but the shifting flow combined with the rhyme scheme makes it hard to parse. Perhaps you might detail what effect you are looking to create and we could go from there with spe…"
20 Sun

Posted a poem
SLIGHT
"If pain is commensurate with pleaure,"
Open thread 10 lines
18 Fri

Received a critique
on Respite from @loved
"you say curtly what others go about round and round …I don't know what sheared the sheen… the shaft unclean…. and if I were you…. I'd have had the one guillotined …but then language is not what I command …tis love only…"
18 Fri

Received a critique
on Never Again from @loved
"as you will learn more and more tis the iron pillar of Amazon if there were one ... else Ashoka's he had many"
18 Fri

Posted a poem
Never Again
"Hurt, wounded,"
Open thread 10 lines
15 Tue

Posted a poem
Stifled
"You smacked a moratorium"
Open thread 21 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
October 2013 — 5 poems
11 Fri

First critique offered
on "Reaching To" (since unpublished) by @tiptopturtles
10 Thu

Most-discussed work
SILENCED

16 critiques to date.
10 Thu

First publication
Silenced (since unpublished)
09 Wed

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