vinnie16

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REFUGE

Posted Jan 16, 2014 · 25 lines · 3 critiques

MY WORLD
SO MUCH TURMOIL.
COME HEAR ME .
FOR YOUR EYES PUT ME AT PEACE.
YOU TOUCH ME WITH SOFT WINDS
AND ENTER MY HEART WITH LOVE .
COME LET ME HOLD YOU.
PROTECT YOU.
WHILE IM AT EASE.
BE MNE FOR ETERNITY.
IN MY WORLD THERE IS NOTHING WITH OUT YOU.
LET ME BE YOUR OMEGA.
THE ONE YOU REST YOUR HEAD ON.
FOR I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU WEARY OR BROKEN.

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MY FIRE FEEDS OFF YOUR AIR.
LEAVE ME WITH YOUR HANDS.
I CAN ONLY GIVE YOU MY HEART.
BUILD AN EMPIRE FOR MY QUEEN, MY LOVE.
I FADE AT NIGHT IN THE EYES, BUT NEVER LAY DOWN IN DEFEAT.
I WONT REST UNTIL YOU’RE IN MY ARMS.
UNTIL IM HOME
UNTIL I PLACE MY LIPS ON THE ONE I LOVE.

(I WROTE THIS FOR MY WIFE JENNIFER WHILE SERVING IN OIF)

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VINCENT MUSCATO

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"Straight in no complete capitalisation of your work, this made it shout, so if it is for the lady there then she will need ear protectors.. I have written it in the way others would put it in lower case with a few chang…"
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"How did Stan figure out you were military? I didn't pick it, except for the belief in self and the loyalty to your fellow man. Like Ian said, watch the spelling. I raze my hands,"
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"Your poem has 23 lines, out of those there are 16 of the personal pronoun " I " and 8 of the personal pronoun " my " ... a lot of those could be taken out and the poem would be improved, especially if you include the re…"
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