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some human
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The "Fixed" Cake
Take a cake and destroy it, crumble it, again and again.
Then say sorry, again and again.
Now the cake is back in shape. But did you realize it’s not how it was before there are crumbs left aside, it’s falling apart, and it’s all messed up.
It isn’t about cake anymore. The "sorry" never fixes the mess completely… never.
some human’s timeline
- August 2026
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14 FriReceived a critique
on The Disguise from @ritam
"The "you're one big dullard" sentence seemed an awkward fit with the rest of the piece. Just an opinion. All poetry being subjective." -
12 WedReceived a critique
on The "Fixed" Cake from @Anthony Mckeown
"I think you are talking about things that can't "unhappen", the cake a metaphor for life, and saying sorry doesn't fix things. I can feel the anguish here." -
12 WedFirst publication
The "Fixed" Cake
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12 WedPosted a poem
The "Fixed" Cake
" Take a cake and destroy it, crumble it, again and again. " -
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im human. and have bad English. plus im a still a kid so yeah.
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